cvs commit: ALFS/docs/syntax_doc/alfs_dtd elem_alfs.xml elem_archive.xml

jwrober at linuxfromscratch.org jwrober at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Feb 22 19:08:16 PST 2004


jwrober     04/02/22 20:08:16

  Modified:    docs/syntax_doc/alfs_dtd elem_alfs.xml elem_archive.xml
  Log:
  finished first pass across all elements
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.17      +14 -12    ALFS/docs/syntax_doc/alfs_dtd/elem_alfs.xml
  
  Index: elem_alfs.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/ALFS/docs/syntax_doc/alfs_dtd/elem_alfs.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.16
  retrieving revision 1.17
  diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
  --- elem_alfs.xml	6 Nov 2003 05:17:32 -0000	1.16
  +++ elem_alfs.xml	23 Feb 2004 03:08:16 -0000	1.17
  @@ -6,17 +6,16 @@
   <title>Syntax</title>
   
   <synopsis>
  -<!ELEMENT alfs     ((configure | copy | download | execute | link |
  -                     make | mkdir | move | ownership | package |
  -                     patch | permissions | remove | search_replace |
  -                     stage | textdump | unpack)*)>
  +<!ELEMENT alfs           ((configure | copy | download | execute | link | 
  +                           make | mkdir | move | ownership | package | 
  +                           patch | permissions | remove | search_replace | 
  +                           stage | textdump | unpack)*)>
   <!ATTLIST alfs
  -          base       CDATA #IMPLIED
  -          version    CDATA #FIXED "3.1">
  +          base           CDATA #IMPLIED
  +          version        CDATA #FIXED "3.1">
   </synopsis>
   
   <para>See also :  
  -
   <xref linkend="elem_configure"/>  |  
   <xref linkend="elem_copy"/>  |  
   <xref linkend="elem_download"/>  |  
  @@ -44,14 +43,14 @@
   <para>The element <filename>alfs</filename> is the root element of the
   &book-product;. This means that an <acronym>ALFS</acronym> profile should
   contain one and only one <filename>alfs</filename> element with all the other
  -elements being embedded in this element.</para>
  +elements being embedded within this element.</para>
   
   <para>When processing an <filename>alfs</filename> element, one processes all its
   embedded children in their order of occurence.</para>
   
   <para>Notice that all the main operation elements
   (<filename>configure</filename> to <filename>unpack</filename>) are surrounded
  -by parathensis [ ( ) ]and followed by an asterisk
  +by parathensis [ ( ) ] and followed by an asterisk
   [ * ]. The asterisk signifies that each main operation element can
   be used optionally inside the <filename>alfs</filename> declaration in a
   profile and that, if used, they can be used more than once.</para>
  @@ -64,7 +63,7 @@
   <xref linkend="elem_base"/>.</para>
   
   <para>The attribute <filename>version</filename> identifies the version of the
  -ALFS profile syntax used; it should be
  +<acronym>ALFS</acronym> profile syntax used; it should be
   <userinput>"3.1"</userinput>.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  @@ -74,16 +73,19 @@
   
   <screen><userinput><!DOCTYPE alfs SYSTEM "alfs-3.1.dtd" [
   
  -<!ENTITY % general_entities SYSTEM "entities/general">
  +	<!ENTITY % general_entities SYSTEM "entities/general">
   
  -%general_entities;
  +	%general_entities;
   
   ]>
  +
   <alfs version="3.1">
   
    .....
   
   </alfs></userinput></screen>
  +
  +<para>There is no equivalent Bash script example for this element.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.11      +4 -4      ALFS/docs/syntax_doc/alfs_dtd/elem_archive.xml
  
  Index: elem_archive.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/ALFS/docs/syntax_doc/alfs_dtd/elem_archive.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.10
  retrieving revision 1.11
  diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
  --- elem_archive.xml	6 Nov 2003 03:15:46 -0000	1.10
  +++ elem_archive.xml	23 Feb 2004 03:08:16 -0000	1.11
  @@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
   <title>Syntax</title>
   
   <synopsis>
  -<!ELEMENT archive     (#PCDATA)>
  +<!ELEMENT archive        (#PCDATA)>
   </synopsis>
   
  -<para>This element occurs in the 
  +<para>This element occurs in the element :  
   <xref linkend="elem_unpack"/>.
   </para>
   
  @@ -31,11 +31,11 @@
   	<destination>/usr/src</destination>
   </unpack></userinput></screen>
   
  -<para>The equivalent bash script is :</para>
  +<para>The equivalent bash script is :</para>
   
   <screen><userinput>echo Unpacking /usr/src/lfs-packages/gzip.1.2.4a.tar.gz into /usr/src
   cd /usr/src
  -<command>tar xzvf /usr/src/lfs-packages/gzip.1.2.4a.tar.gz</command></userinput></screen>
  +<command>tar -xzvf /usr/src/lfs-packages/gzip.1.2.4a.tar.gz</command></userinput></screen>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  



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