Text Updates Completed

go moko gomoko at yahoo.com
Fri Dec 2 00:25:40 PST 2005


--- Jim Gifford <lfs at jg555.com> wrote:

> I just finished updating a lot of text in the book.
> I request that 
> anyone that views the 11302005 and later version of
> the book(when it 
> gets rendered) to help verify the text. If you see
> something that is 
> questionable or don't like the wording, post a note
> here or reply to 
> this message.

End chapter 10:

- 10.29.1
"Install the package:"
=> The command 'make install' lacks after the text

- 10.56.1
"Move a misplaced program to their proper location"
=> "Move a misplaced program to ***its*** proper
location"

- 10.66
"/tools/bin/find /{,usr/}{bin,lib,sbin} -type f \
   -exec /tools/bin/strip --strip-debug '{}' ';'"
=> "/tools/bin/find /{,usr/}{bin,lib***,lib64***,sbin}
-type f \
   -exec /tools/bin/strip --strip-debug '{}' ';'"


Regards
G. Moko



		
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