r1155 - in trunk/BOOK: . boot/common final-system introduction/common prologue/common

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Feb 7 20:52:56 PST 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-02-07 21:52:55 -0700 (Tue, 07 Feb 2006)
New Revision: 1155

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparcv8-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-chapter.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
Log:
Added section on package management, and various other text fixes

Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 
     <note os="a">
       <para>The commands in the remainder of the book should be run as
-      the<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Also,
+      the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Also,
       double-check that $LFS is set as root.</para>
     </note>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/alpha-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="alpha/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="mips/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="mips64-64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="multilib/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="mips64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="ppc/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="ppc64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="sparc/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="sparc64-64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparc64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="multilib/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="sparc64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparcv8-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparcv8-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/sparcv8-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="sparc/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="x86/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="x86_64-64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-chapter.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-chapter.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/x86_64-chapter.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -12,6 +12,7 @@
   <title>Installing Basic System Software</title>
 
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/introduction.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/pkgmgt.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="common/testsuitesagain.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="multilib/temp-perl.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" href="x86_64/linux-libc-headers.xml"/>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 <!ENTITY patches-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/patches/downloads/">
 <!ENTITY livecd-root "&lfs-root;livecd/">
 <!ENTITY test-results "&lfs-root;lfs/build-logs/&generic-version;/">
-<!ENTITY errata "&lfs-root;lfs/errata/&generic-version;/">
+<!ENTITY errata "&lfs-root;clfs/errata/&generic-version;/">
 
 <!ENTITY gnu "http://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/">
 <!ENTITY alpha-gnu "ftp://alpha.gnu.org/gnu/">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -43,6 +43,9 @@
           <para>[Chris] - Removed inetutils from boot section - it
 will be covered in the "netboot" hint.</para>
         </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[Chris] - Added section on Package Management - moved out of BLFS.</para>
+        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/resources.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@
     FAQ or the mailing list archives. You can find the IRC network at
     <uri>irc.linuxfromscratch.org</uri>. The support channel for cross-lfs is
     named #cross-lfs. For support on the standard LFS the support channel
-    is named #lfs-support. If you need to show people the ouptut of your
-    problems, please use http://pastebin.linuxfromscratch.org and refernce
-    the pastebin URL when asking your questions</para>
+    is named #lfs-support. If you need to show people the output of your
+    problems, please use http://pastebin.linuxfromscratch.org and reference
+    the pastebin URL when asking your questions.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 
     <para>For additional information on the packages, useful tips are
     available in the LFS Package Reference page located at <ulink
-    url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/~matthew/LFS-references.html"/>.</para>
+    url="&lfs-root;~matthew/LFS-references.html"/>.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml	2006-02-07 19:14:37 UTC (rev 1154)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml	2006-02-08 04:52:55 UTC (rev 1155)
@@ -32,19 +32,18 @@
     <title>Part III - Make the Cross-Compile Tools</title>
 
     <para>Part III shows you how to make a set of Cross-Compiler
-          tools. These tools allow you make a set of tools
-          that will run on your host system, but will allow
-          you to cross-build packages for your target system.</para>
+          tools. These tools can run on your host system but allow you to
+          build packages that will run on your target system.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2>
     <title>Part IV - Building the Basic Tools</title>
 
-    <para>Part IV explains how to build a tool chain built
+    <para>Part IV explains how to build a tool chain designed
           to operate on your target system. These are the tools
           that will allow you to build a working system on your 
-          target host.</para>
+          target computer.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 
@@ -64,7 +63,10 @@
   <sect2>
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
-    <para>TEXT NEEDED.</para>
+    <para>The Appendices contain various information that doesn't really fit
+    anywhere else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
+    terms used in the book, and Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
+    have helped work on the LFS project and website.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 




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