r1197 - in trunk/BOOK: boot/common boot/mips final-preps final-system/common final-system/multilib final-system/ppc materials/mips

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Feb 22 23:25:19 PST 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-02-23 00:25:17 -0700 (Thu, 23 Feb 2006)
New Revision: 1197

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
   trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml
   trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/colo-build.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/temp-perl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/util-linux.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/temp-perl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/yaboot.xml
   trunk/BOOK/materials/mips/packages.xml
Log:
Various text updates

Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/common/devices.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@
     <note os="a">
       <para>The commands in the remainder of the book should be run as
       the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user. Also,
-      double-check that $LFS is set as root.</para>
+      double-check that $LFS is set as
+      <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>.</para>
     </note>
 
     <para os="b">When the kernel boots the system, it requires the presence

Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/bootloaders.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -10,10 +10,10 @@
 
   <title>Bootloaders</title>
 
-  <para>On MIPS based platforms, we have 2 different bootloaders. Colo
+  <para>On MIPS based platforms, we have 2 different bootloaders - Colo
   for the Cobalt based MIPS machines and Arcload for the SGI Machines.
   At this time, in the boot scenario, the only bootloader we can build
-  and that is useable is Cobalt bootloader. On SGI Machines that follow
+  and that is usable is Cobalt bootloader. On SGI Machines that follow
   this build method, we recommend to do a netboot. Information about
   netbooting can be found at the link below.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/colo-build.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/colo-build.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/mips/colo-build.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -26,6 +26,10 @@
     href="../../final-system/mips/colo.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='a'])"/>
 
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
+    href="../../final-system/mips/colo.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='b'])"/>
+
 <screen os="aa"><userinput>cd tools/elf2rfx
 make CC=gcc
 cd ../..
@@ -33,7 +37,7 @@
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
     href="../../final-system/mips/colo.xml"
-    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='b'])"/>
+    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='c'])"/>
 
 <screen os="ab"><userinput>cp chain/colo-chain.elf ${LFS}/boot/vmlinux
 gzip -9 ${LFS}/boot/vmlinux</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-preps/addinguser.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -83,8 +83,7 @@
   and <filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename> by making <systemitem
   class="username">lfs</systemitem> the directorys' owner:</para>
 
-<screen><userinput>chown -v lfs $LFS
-chown -v lfs $LFS/tools
+<screen><userinput>chown -v lfs $LFS/tools
 chown -v lfs $LFS/cross-tools</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>If a separate working directory was created as suggested, 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/temp-perl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/temp-perl.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/temp-perl.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -51,15 +51,21 @@
 
 <screen os="g"><userinput>make perl utilities</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="h">Install these tools and their libraries:</para>
+  <para os="h">Although Perl comes with a test suite, it is not recommended
+  to run it at this point. Only part of Perl was built and running
+  <command>make test</command> now will cause the rest of Perl to be built
+  as well, which is unnecessary at this point. The test suite can be run
+  later in this chapter if desired.</para>
 
-<screen os="i"><userinput>cp -v perl pod/pod2man /tools/bin
+    <para os="i">Install these tools and their libraries:</para>
+
+<screen os="j"><userinput>cp -v perl pod/pod2man /tools/bin
 install -dv /tools/lib/perl5/&perl-version;
 cp -Rv lib/* /tools/lib/perl5/&perl-version;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="j">Finally, create a necessary symlink:</para>
+    <para os="k">Finally, create a necessary symlink:</para>
 
-<screen os="k"><userinput>ln -sv /tools/bin/perl /usr/bin</userinput></screen>
+<screen os="l"><userinput>ln -sv /tools/bin/perl /usr/bin</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/util-linux.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/util-linux.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/util-linux.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
     LFS-Bootscripts package:</para>
 
 <screen os="h"><userinput>make HAVE_KILL=yes HAVE_SLN=yes install
-mv /usr/bin/logger /bin</userinput></screen>
+mv -v /usr/bin/logger /bin</userinput></screen>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/temp-perl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/temp-perl.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/temp-perl.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -64,6 +64,10 @@
     href="../common/temp-perl.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='k'])"/>
 
+    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
+    href="../common/temp-perl.xml"
+    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='l'])"/>
+
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 role="content">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/yaboot.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/yaboot.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/yaboot.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
     <title>Installation of Yaboot</title>
 
     <para>Yaboot has a compilation error. The following patch properly fixes
-    that issue</para>
+    the issue:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../yaboot-&yaboot-version;-fix-1.patch</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/materials/mips/packages.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/materials/mips/packages.xml	2006-02-23 07:11:39 UTC (rev 1196)
+++ trunk/BOOK/materials/mips/packages.xml	2006-02-23 07:25:17 UTC (rev 1197)
@@ -35,6 +35,6 @@
 
   </variablelist>
 
-  <para os="a">Total size of these packages: about 240 KB</para>
+  <para os="a">Total size of these packages: about 349 KB</para>
 
 </sect1>




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