r1207 - trunk/BOOK/final-system/common

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Feb 25 21:37:29 PST 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-02-25 22:37:28 -0700 (Sat, 25 Feb 2006)
New Revision: 1207

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gawk.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/readline.xml
Log:
Minor grammar fixes

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gawk.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gawk.xml	2006-02-26 01:11:39 UTC (rev 1206)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gawk.xml	2006-02-26 05:37:28 UTC (rev 1207)
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 
 <screen os="d"><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr --libexecdir=/usr/lib</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="h1">Now we will fix an issue that will cause the gettext testsuite's
+    <para os="h1">Now fix an issue that will cause the Gettext testsuite
     to fail:</para>
 
 <screen os="h2"><userinput>echo '#define HAVE_LC_MESSAGES 1' >> config.h</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml	2006-02-26 01:11:39 UTC (rev 1206)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/ncurses.xml	2006-02-26 05:37:28 UTC (rev 1207)
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 
 <screen os="g"><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="h">Move the Ncurses static libraries to the proper locations:</para>
+    <para os="h">Move the Ncurses static libraries to the proper location:</para>
 
 <screen os="i"><userinput>mv -v /lib/lib{panel,menu,form,ncurses,ncurses++,curses}.a /usr/lib</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/readline.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/readline.xml	2006-02-26 01:11:39 UTC (rev 1206)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/readline.xml	2006-02-26 05:37:28 UTC (rev 1207)
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Readline</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">The following patch are updates from the maintainer. The
+    <para os="p1">The following patch contains updates from the maintainer. The
     maintainer of Readline only releases these patches to fix serious issues.</para>
 
 <screen os="p2"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&readline-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>




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