r1034 - in trunk/BOOK: boot/common final-system/common testsuite-tools/common the-end

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Jan 10 05:02:57 PST 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-01-10 06:02:53 -0700 (Tue, 10 Jan 2006)
New Revision: 1034

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/boot/common/e2fsprogs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysklogd.xml
   trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tree.xml
   trunk/BOOK/the-end/reboot.xml
Log:
Minor changes to several package instructions

Modified: trunk/BOOK/boot/common/e2fsprogs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/boot/common/e2fsprogs.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/boot/common/e2fsprogs.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -55,10 +55,6 @@
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
     href="../../final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml"
-    xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='h'])"/>
-
-    <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"
-    href="../../final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='i'])"/>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
       <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>Bash, Coreutils, Diffutils, Expect, GCC, Gettext,
+        <seg>Bash, Binutils, Coreutils, Diffutils, Expect, GCC, Gettext,
         Glibc, Grep, Make, Patch, Perl, Sed, Tcl, and Texinfo</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/e2fsprogs.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -36,8 +36,8 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of E2fsprogs</title>
 
-    <para os="a">It is recommended that E2fsprogs be built in a subdirectory of
-    the source tree:</para>
+    <para os="a">The E2fsprogs documentation recommends that the package be
+    built in a subdirectory of the source tree:</para>
 
 <screen os="b"><userinput>mkdir build
 cd build</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">libmudflap</filename></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>The libmudflap libraries are used by GCC for instrumenting
-          pointer and array defreferncing operations.</para>
+          pointer and array dereferencing operations.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-gcc libmudflap">
             <primary sortas="c-libmudflap*">libmudflap*</primary>
           </indexterm>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/inetutils.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
 
-    <para os="p1">All programs that come with Inetutils will not be installed.
+    <para os="p1">Not all programs that come with Inetutils will be installed.
     However, the Inetutils build system will insist on installing all the
     man pages anyway. The following patch will correct this
     situation:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@
 
 <screen os="c"><userinput>./configure --libdir=/lib --enable-shared</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="d">Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command> program
-    and it's man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
+    <para os="d">Disable the installation of the <command>groups</command>
+    program and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
 
 <screen os="e"><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile
 sed -i '/groups/d' man/Makefile</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysklogd.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysklogd.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/sysklogd.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
           <para>Logs the messages that system programs offer for logging.
           Every logged message contains at least a date stamp and a hostname,
           and normally the program's name too, but that depends on how
-          trusting the logging daemon is told to be</para>
+          trusting the logging daemon is told to be.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-sysklogd syslogd">
             <primary sortas="b-syslogd">syslogd</primary>
           </indexterm>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tree.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tree.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/testsuite-tools/common/tree.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
       <segtitle>&dependencies;</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>GCC and Coreutils</seg>
+        <seg>Coreutils, GCC, and Make</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/the-end/reboot.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/the-end/reboot.xml	2006-01-10 06:48:36 UTC (rev 1033)
+++ trunk/BOOK/the-end/reboot.xml	2006-01-10 13:02:53 UTC (rev 1034)
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>logout</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Then unmount the virtual files systems:</para>
+  <para>Then unmount the virtual file systems:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>umount $LFS/dev/pts
 umount $LFS/dev/shm




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