r2013 - / trunk/BOOK/introduction/common trunk/BOOK/prologue/common

jim at linuxfromscratch.org jim at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Jul 15 12:45:09 PDT 2006


Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-15 13:45:08 -0600 (Sat, 15 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2013

Modified:
   /
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/how.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
Log:
 r4621 at server (orig r2134):  chris at beaker67.com | 2006-07-15 09:20:45 -0700
 Text fixes



Property changes on: 
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Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2133
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2134

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml	2006-07-15 07:45:19 UTC (rev 2012)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/askforhelp.xml	2006-07-15 19:45:08 UTC (rev 2013)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>The value of the $CLFS_HOST, $CLFS_TARGET, $BUILD32, and $BUILD64
-        enviornment variables.</para>
+        environment variables.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>The package or section in which the problem was encountered.</para>
@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>Note whether you have deviated from the book at all. A package
-        change or even a minor change to any command is considered deviation.
-        </para>
+        version change or even a minor change to any command is considered
+        deviation.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -79,9 +79,10 @@
 
     <para>If something goes wrong while running the <command>configure</command>
     script, review the <filename>config.log</filename> file. This file may
-    contain the errors you encountered <command>configure</command>. This file
-    logs errors that may have not been printed to the screen. Include only the
-    <emphasis>relevant</emphasis> lines if you need to ask for help.</para>
+    contain the errors you encountered during <command>configure</command>.
+    It often logs errors that may have not been printed to the screen. Include
+    only the <emphasis>relevant</emphasis> lines if you need to ask for
+    help.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/how.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/how.xml	2006-07-15 07:45:19 UTC (rev 2012)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/how.xml	2006-07-15 19:45:08 UTC (rev 2013)
@@ -20,12 +20,17 @@
 
   <para>As an alternative to installing an entire separate distribution
   onto your machine, you may wish to use the Linux From Scratch LiveCD.
-  The CD works well as a host system, providing all the tools you need to
-  successfully follow the instructions in this book. Additionally, it
-  contains all the source packages, patches and a copy of this book. So
-  once you have the CD, no network connection or additional downloads are
-  necessary. For more information about the LFS LiveCD or to download a copy,
-  visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/></para>
+  This CD works well as a host system, providing all the tools you need to
+  successfully follow the instructions in this book. It does also
+  contain source packages and patches for the LFS book, and a copy of the LFS
+  book, but not the needed packages or book for CLFS. You can still use the
+  CD for building CLFS, but you will need to download the packages, patches
+  and book separately. You can also look at
+  <ulink url="&hints-root;lfscd-remastering-howto.txt"/>
+  for infomation on building your own CD, replacing the LFS packages and book
+  with those for CLFS. Once you have the CD, no network connection or
+  additional downloads are necessary. For more information about the LFS
+  LiveCD or to download a copy, visit <ulink url="&livecd-root;"/>.</para>
 
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-partitioning"/> of this book describes how
   to create a new Linux native partition and file system, the place
@@ -47,9 +52,9 @@
   circular dependencies—for example, to compile a compiler, you need a
   compiler.</para>
 
-  <para>The process of building cross-compile tools first involves installing
-  building all the necessary tools to create a build system for the target 
-  machine. With the Cross-Compiled tools we just created, we elminate any
+  <para>The process of building cross-compile tools first involves building and
+  installing all the necessary tools to create a build system for the target 
+  machine. With these cross-compiled tools, we eliminate any
   dependencies on the toolchain from our host distro.</para>
 
   <para>After we build our <quote>Cross-Tools</quote>, we start building
@@ -59,7 +64,7 @@
   <xref linkend="chapter-temp-system"/>.</para>
 
   <para>In <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>, the full CLFS system is
-  built. Depending on the system you are cross-compiling for, either you will
+  built. Depending on the system you are cross-compiling for, you will either
   boot the minimal temp-system on the target machine, or chroot into it.</para>
 
   <para>The <command>chroot</command> (change root) program is used to enter

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml	2006-07-15 07:45:19 UTC (rev 2012)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml	2006-07-15 19:45:08 UTC (rev 2013)
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
   <title>Foreword</title>
 
   <para>The Linux From Scratch Project has seen many changes in the
-  few years of its existance.  I personally became involved with the
+  few years of its existence.  I personally became involved with the
   project in 1999, around the time of the 2.x releases.  At that time,
   the build process was to create static binaries with the host system,
   then chroot and build the final binaries on top of the static ones.</para>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
   class processor.  With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
   processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
   Ryan Oliver developed and documented a process by which you could
-  build Linux for any system and from any system; by use of
+  build Linux for any system and from any system, by use of
   cross-compilation techniques.  Thus,  the Cross LFS project was born.</para>
 
   <para>CLFS follows the same guiding principles the LFS project has

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml	2006-07-15 07:45:19 UTC (rev 2012)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml	2006-07-15 19:45:08 UTC (rev 2013)
@@ -68,7 +68,8 @@
     terms used in the book, Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
     have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
     and D have information about package dependencies and the the
-    build order.</para>
+    build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
+    arch-specific issues.</para>
 
   </sect2>
 




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