r2031 - / trunk/BOOK trunk/BOOK/introduction/common trunk/BOOK/prologue/common

jim at linuxfromscratch.org jim at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Jul 18 00:45:45 PDT 2006


Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-18 01:45:42 -0600 (Tue, 18 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2031

Modified:
   /
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml
Log:
 r4659 at server (orig r2152):  jeremy | 2006-07-17 23:30:15 -0700
 Minor foreword fixes thanks to Karen



Property changes on: 
___________________________________________________________________
Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2151
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2152

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2006-07-18 07:45:42 UTC (rev 2031)
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <!ENTITY month "07"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY month_name "July">
-<!ENTITY day "16"> <!-- Use two digits -->
+<!ENTITY day "17"> <!-- Use two digits -->
 <!ENTITY year "2006"> <!-- Use four digits -->
 
 <!ENTITY releasedate "&month_name; &day;, &year;">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml	2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/common/changelog.xml	2006-07-18 07:45:42 UTC (rev 2031)
@@ -37,6 +37,15 @@
 -->
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>July 17, 2006</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[jeremy] - Minor foreword fixups courtesy of Karen`.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>July 16, 2006</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml	2006-07-18 07:45:30 UTC (rev 2030)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/foreword.xml	2006-07-18 07:45:42 UTC (rev 2031)
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   udev dynamic device structure, sanitized kernel headers, and other
   improvements to the Linux From Scratch system.</para>
 
-  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on a x86
+  <para>The one "flaw" in LFS is that it has always been based on an x86
   class processor.  With the advent of the Athlon 64 and Intel EM64T
   processors, the x86-only LFS is no longer ideal. Throughout this time,
   Ryan Oliver developed and documented a process by which you could
@@ -39,13 +39,13 @@
   architectures such as Sparc, MIPS, and Alpha, and much more.</para>
 
   <para>We hope you enjoy building your own CLFS system, and the benefits
-  that come from a system tailored to your needs!</para>
+  that come from a system tailored to your needs.</para>
 
 <literallayout>--
 Jeremy Utley, CLFS 1.x Release Manager (Page Author)
 Jim Gifford, CLFS Project Co-leader
 Ryan Oliver, CLFS Project Co-leader
-Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierin, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
+Joe Ciccone, Justin Knierim, Chris Staub, Matt Darcy, Ken Moffat,
 Manuel Canales Esparcia, and Nathan Coulson - CLFS Developers</literallayout>
 
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