r2075 - / trunk/BOOK trunk/BOOK/prologue/common

jim at linuxfromscratch.org jim at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Jul 22 12:47:24 PDT 2006


Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-22 13:47:23 -0600 (Sat, 22 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2075

Modified:
   /
   trunk/BOOK/
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml
Log:
 r4756 at server (orig r2195):  jim | 2006-07-22 12:12:31 -0700
  r4748 at server:  jim | 2006-07-22 12:11:39 -0700
  Text Updates.
 



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   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2195


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Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml	2006-07-22 19:46:59 UTC (rev 2074)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml	2006-07-22 19:47:23 UTC (rev 2075)
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
 
   <para>Because the CLFS book assumes <emphasis>at least</emphasis> this basic
   level of skill, the various CLFS support forums are unlikely to be able to
-  provide you with much assistance; you will find that your questions regarding
-  such basic knowledge will likely go unanswered, or you will simply be referred
-  to the CLFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
+  provide you with much assistance. Your questions regarding such basic knowledge
+  will likely go unanswered, or you will be referred to the CLFS essential
+  pre-reading list.</para>
 
   <para>Before building a CLFS system, we recommend reading the following
   HOWTOs:</para>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
       <para remap="verbatim">The Essential Pre-Reading Hint
       <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
 
-      <para>This is an Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
+      <para>This is an hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
       It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
       wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an
       understanding of many of the topics in this hint.</para>




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