r2082 - / branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common

jim at linuxfromscratch.org jim at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Jul 22 17:04:04 PDT 2006


Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-22 18:04:03 -0600 (Sat, 22 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2082

Modified:
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   branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml
Log:
 r4768 at server (orig r2199):  jciccone | 2006-07-22 15:13:55 -0700
 Text Updates.



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Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2198
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2199

Modified: branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml	2006-07-23 00:03:37 UTC (rev 2081)
+++ branches/clfs-2.0/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml	2006-07-23 00:04:03 UTC (rev 2082)
@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@
   required.</para>
 
   <para>Because the CLFS book assumes <emphasis>at least</emphasis> this basic
-  level of skill, the various LFS support forums are unlikely to be able to
-  provide you with much assistance; you will find that your questions regarding
-  such basic knowledge will likely go unanswered, or you will simply be referred
-  to the CLFS essential pre-reading list.</para>
+  level of skill, the various CLFS support forums are unlikely to be able to
+  provide you with much assistance. Your questions regarding such basic knowledge
+  will likely go unanswered, or you will be referred to the CLFS essential
+  pre-reading list.</para>
 
   <para>Before building a CLFS system, we recommend reading the following
   HOWTOs:</para>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
       <para remap="verbatim">The Essential Pre-Reading Hint
       <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
 
-      <para>This is an Hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
+      <para>This is an hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
       It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
       wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an
       understanding of many of the topics in this hint.</para>




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