r2133 - / trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64 trunk/BOOK/prologue/common

jim at linuxfromscratch.org jim at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Jul 22 23:08:26 PDT 2006


Author: jim
Date: 2006-07-23 00:08:25 -0600 (Sun, 23 Jul 2006)
New Revision: 2133

Modified:
   /
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/colo.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64/glibc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml
Log:
 r4870 at server (orig r2251):  chris at beaker67.com | 2006-07-22 21:32:39 -0700
 Text fixes



Property changes on: 
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Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2250
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2251

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/colo.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/colo.xml	2006-07-23 06:08:15 UTC (rev 2132)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips/colo.xml	2006-07-23 06:08:25 UTC (rev 2133)
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
     RaQ2, Qube, or the Qube2.</para>
   </note>
 
-    <para os="p3">This patch updates Fixes a relocation error when linking with
-    binutils:</para>
+    <para os="p3">This patch fixes a relocation error when linking with
+    Binutils:</para>
 
 <screen os="p4"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&colo-relocation-patch;</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64/glibc.xml	2006-07-23 06:08:15 UTC (rev 2132)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/mips64-64/glibc.xml	2006-07-23 06:08:25 UTC (rev 2133)
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
     href="../x86_64-64/glibc.xml"
     xpointer="xpointer(//*[@os='l2'])"/>
 
-    <para>Now we will force GLIBC to build as 64 bit instead of the default
+    <para>Now we will force Glibc to build as 64-bit instead of the default
     n32 with the following sed:</para>
 
     <screen><userinput>sed -i '/default) machine=/s/n32/64/g' \

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml	2006-07-23 06:08:15 UTC (rev 2132)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/common/prerequisites.xml	2006-07-23 06:08:25 UTC (rev 2133)
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
       <para remap="verbatim">The Essential Pre-Reading Hint
       <ulink url="&hints-root;essential_prereading.txt"/></para>
 
-      <para>This is an hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
+      <para>This is a hint written specifically for users new to Linux.
       It includes a list of links to excellent sources of information on a
       wide range of topics. Anyone attempting to install CLFS should have an
       understanding of many of the topics in this hint.</para>




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