r1745 - in trunk/BOOK: cross-tools/x86 final-system/common final-system/multilib

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu Jun 8 22:38:44 PDT 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-06-08 23:38:41 -0600 (Thu, 08 Jun 2006)
New Revision: 1745

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml
Log:
Minor text fixes

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml	2006-06-08 22:31:32 UTC (rev 1744)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml	2006-06-09 05:38:41 UTC (rev 1745)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 #undef STARTFILE_PREFIX_SPEC
 #define STARTFILE_PREFIX_SPEC \"/tools/lib/\"" >> gcc/config/linux.h</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para os="ai">Now alter <command>gcc</command>'s c preprocessors default
+    <para os="ai">Now alter <command>gcc</command>'s c preprocessor's default
     include search path to use <filename class="directory">/tools</filename> only:</para>
 
 <screen os="aj"><userinput>cp -v gcc/Makefile.in{,.orig}

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml	2006-06-08 22:31:32 UTC (rev 1744)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/binutils.xml	2006-06-09 05:38:41 UTC (rev 1745)
@@ -83,8 +83,8 @@
     </variablelist>
 
     <important os="o">
-      <para>The test suite for Binutils in this section is  considered critical.
-      Do not skip it under any circumstances.</para>
+      <para>The test suite for Binutils is considered critical.
+      Do not skip it under any circumstance.</para>
     </important>
 
     <para os="p">Test the results:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml	2006-06-08 22:31:32 UTC (rev 1744)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/gcc.xml	2006-06-09 05:38:41 UTC (rev 1745)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 <screen os="k"><userinput>make bootstrap</userinput></screen>
 
     <important os="l">
-      <para>In this section, the test suite for GCC is considered
+      <para>The test suite for GCC is considered
       critical. Do not skip it under any circumstance.</para>
     </important>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml	2006-06-08 22:31:32 UTC (rev 1744)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/glibc.xml	2006-06-09 05:38:41 UTC (rev 1745)
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 <screen os="k"><userinput>make</userinput></screen>
 
     <important os="l">
-      <para>In this section, the test suite for Glibc is considered critical.
+      <para>The test suite for Glibc is considered critical.
       Do not skip it under any circumstance.</para>
     </important>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml	2006-06-08 22:31:32 UTC (rev 1744)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/common/shadow.xml	2006-06-09 05:38:41 UTC (rev 1745)
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     <varlistentry>
       <term><parameter>--without-audit</parameter></term>
       <listitem><para>Support for auditing is enabled by default, but a
-      a library that it needs is not installed in a base LFS system. This
+      library that it needs is not installed in a base LFS system. This
       switch disables auditing support.</para></listitem>
     </varlistentry>
     <varlistentry>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml	2006-06-08 22:31:32 UTC (rev 1744)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/multilib/shadow-64bit.xml	2006-06-09 05:38:41 UTC (rev 1745)
@@ -28,8 +28,9 @@
       <parameter>--with-libcrack</parameter> to the <command>configure</command>
       command below.</para>
 
-      <para>You will also need to use the following sed after the configuration command
-      to make sure the correct library is linked.</para>
+      <para>You will also need to use the following sed after the
+      <command>configure</command> commmand
+      to make sure the correct library is linked:</para>
 
       <screen><userinput>sed -i libtool \
          -e 's@\(^sys_lib_search_path_spec=\).*@\1"/lib64 /usr/lib64 /usr/local/lib64"@g' \




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