r1499 - in trunk/BOOK: bootable/x86 cross-tools/x86 final-system/ppc temp-system/common

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon May 1 10:22:44 PDT 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-05-01 11:22:43 -0600 (Mon, 01 May 2006)
New Revision: 1499

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml
   trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml
Log:
Text/grammar fixes

Modified: trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml	2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev 1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/bootable/x86/kernel.xml	2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev 1499)
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
 
 <screen os="q"><literal>alias char-major-XXX some-module</literal></screen>
 
-    <para os="r">Because of the complications with Hotplug, Udev, and modules,
+    <para os="r">Because of the complications with Udev and modules,
     we strongly recommend starting with a completely non-modular kernel
     configuration, especially if this is the first time using Udev.</para>
 
@@ -159,9 +159,8 @@
       <para>Also, the headers in the system's <filename
       class="directory">include</filename> directory should
       <emphasis>always</emphasis> be the ones against which Glibc was
-      compiled, that is, the ones from the Linux-Libc-Headers package,
-      and therefore, should <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by
-      the kernel headers.</para>
+      compiled (from the Linux-Headers package) and should
+      <emphasis>never</emphasis> be replaced by the kernel headers.</para>
     </warning>
 
   </sect2>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml	2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev 1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/cross-tools/x86/gcc-static.xml	2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev 1499)
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
     <title>Installation of Cross GCC Compiler with Static libgcc
     and no Threads</title>
 
-    <para os="aa">First make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
+    <para os="aa">Make a couple of essential adjustments to the specs file
     to ensure GCC uses our build environment:</para>
 
 <screen os="ab"><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&gcc-specs-patch;</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml	2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev 1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-system/ppc/powerpc-utils.xml	2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev 1499)
@@ -35,12 +35,13 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Powerpc-Utils</title>
 
-    <para>This package, originally pmac-utils, has issues with NewWorld macintoshes.
-    The following patch fixes these issues and generally updates the package.</para>
+    <para>This package, originally pmac-utils, has issues with
+    NewWorld Macintoshes. The following patch fixes these issues
+    and generally updates the package:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&powerpcutils-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Compile the useful programs:</para>
+    <para>Compile the needed programs:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make nvsetenv nvsetvol</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml	2006-05-01 17:03:22 UTC (rev 1498)
+++ trunk/BOOK/temp-system/common/bzip2.xml	2006-05-01 17:22:43 UTC (rev 1499)
@@ -22,7 +22,8 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Bzip2</title>
 
-    <para os="ca">Remove the tests since they won't work on a
+    <para os="ca">Bzip's default Makefile target automatically runs
+    the testsuite as well. Disable the tests since they won't work on a
     multi-architecture build:</para>
 
 <screen os="cb"><userinput>cp -v Makefile{,.orig}




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