r1620 - trunk/BOOK/final-preps

chris at linuxfromscratch.org chris at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue May 16 12:45:53 PDT 2006


Author: chris
Date: 2006-05-16 13:45:51 -0600 (Tue, 16 May 2006)
New Revision: 1620

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/final-preps/aboutlfs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingcrossdir.xml
   trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingtoolsdir.xml
Log:
More minor text fixes

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-preps/aboutlfs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-preps/aboutlfs.xml	2006-05-16 18:37:05 UTC (rev 1619)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-preps/aboutlfs.xml	2006-05-16 19:45:51 UTC (rev 1620)
@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
 
   <para>Throughout this book, the environment variable <envar>LFS</envar> will
   be used several times. It is paramount that this variable is always defined.
-  It should be set to the mount point chosen for the LFS partition.
+  It should be set to the mount point chosen for the CLFS partition.
   Check that the <envar>LFS</envar> variable is set up properly with:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Make sure the output shows the path to the LFS partition's mount
+  <para>Make sure the output shows the path to the CLFS partition's mount
   point, which is <filename class="directory">/mnt/lfs</filename> if the
   provided example was followed. If the output is incorrect, the
   variable can be set with:</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingcrossdir.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingcrossdir.xml	2006-05-16 18:37:05 UTC (rev 1619)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingcrossdir.xml	2006-05-16 19:45:51 UTC (rev 1620)
@@ -10,12 +10,13 @@
 
   <title>Creating the $LFS/cross-tools Directory</title>
 
-  <para>All programs compiled in <xref linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/> will
-  be installed under <filename class="directory">$LFS/cross-tools</filename>
-  to keep them separate from the host programs. The programs compiled here are
-  cross tools and will not be a part of the final LFS system. By keeping these
-  programs in a separate directory, they can easily be discarded later after
-  their use.</para>
+  <para>The cross-binutils and cross-compiler built in
+  <xref linkend="chapter-cross-tools"/> will be installed under
+  <filename class="directory">$LFS/cross-tools</filename> to keep them
+  separate from the host prograrms. The programs compiled here are
+  cross-tools and will not be a part of the final CLFS system or the
+  temp-system. By keeping these programs in a separate directory, they
+  can easily be discarded later after their use.</para>
 
   <para>Create the required directory by running the following as
   <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>:</para>
@@ -24,7 +25,7 @@
 
   <para>The next step is to create a <filename
   class="symlink">/cross-tools</filename> symlink on the host system.
-  This will point to the newly-created directory on the LFS partition.
+  This will point to the newly-created directory on the CLFS partition.
   Run this command as  <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> as well:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>ln -sv $LFS/cross-tools /</userinput></screen>
@@ -32,6 +33,6 @@
   <para>The symlink isn't technically necessary (though the book's
   instructions do assume its existence), but is there mainly for
   consistency (because /tools is also symlinked to $LFS/tools) and to
-  somewhat simplify the installation of the cross-compile tools.</para>
+  simplify the installation of the cross-compile tools.</para>
 
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingtoolsdir.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingtoolsdir.xml	2006-05-16 18:37:05 UTC (rev 1619)
+++ trunk/BOOK/final-preps/creatingtoolsdir.xml	2006-05-16 19:45:51 UTC (rev 1620)
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
   will be installed under <filename class="directory">$LFS/tools</filename>
   to keep them separate from the programs compiled in <xref
   linkend="chapter-building-system"/>. The programs compiled here are
-  temporary tools and will not be a part of the final LFS system. By keeping
+  temporary tools and will not be a part of the final CLFS system. By keeping
   these programs in a separate directory, they can easily be discarded later
   after their use. This also prevents these programs from ending up in the
   host production directories (easy to do by accident in <xref




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