r2391 - / branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/introduction/common branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/prologue/common

jim at linuxfromscratch.org jim at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Sep 2 12:50:11 PDT 2006


Author: jim
Date: 2006-09-02 13:50:10 -0600 (Sat, 02 Sep 2006)
New Revision: 2391

Modified:
   /
   branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml
   branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
Log:
 r5517 at server (orig r2529):  jciccone | 2006-09-02 10:53:20 -0700
 Applied the text updates in r2527 from trunk to the 1.0 branch.



Property changes on: 
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Name: svk:merge
   - b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2528
   + b6734a72-470d-0410-b049-f317dca95413:/:2529

Modified: branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml	2006-09-02 19:50:02 UTC (rev 2390)
+++ branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/introduction/common/acknowledgements.xml	2006-09-02 19:50:10 UTC (rev 2391)
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
   <para>Outside the Development Team</para>
  <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
-      <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisted in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
+      <para>Jürg Billeter - Testing and assisting in the development of the Linux Headers Package</para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>Richard Downing - Testing, typo, and content fixes.</para>
@@ -77,9 +77,10 @@
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
-<para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge people who
-have supported, spotted needed corrections, and testing of the cross-lfs book
-via the CLFS-DEV Mailing lists.</para>
+  <para>The CLFS team would also like to acknowledge contributions of people
+  from <ulink url="clfs-dev at lists.cross-lfs.org"/> and associated mailing lists
+  who have provided valuable technical and editorial corrections while testing
+  the Cross-LFS book.</para>
 
  <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>

Modified: branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml	2006-09-02 19:50:02 UTC (rev 2390)
+++ branches/clfs-1.0/BOOK/prologue/common/organization.xml	2006-09-02 19:50:10 UTC (rev 2391)
@@ -63,12 +63,12 @@
   <sect2>
     <title>Appendices</title>
 
-    <para>The Appendices contain various information that doesn't really fit
-    anywhere else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
-    terms used in the book, Appendix B has Acknowledgments of people who
-    have helped work on the CLFS project and website, and Appendices C
-    and D have information about package dependencies and the the
-    build order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
+    <para>The appendices contain information that doesn't really fit anywhere
+    else in the book. Appendix A contains definitions of acronyms and
+    terms used in the book; Appendix B gives acknowledgments to people
+    who have helped work on the CLFS project and website; Appendix C and
+    D have information about package dependencies and the the build
+    order. Some architectures may have additional appendices for
     arch-specific issues.</para>
 
   </sect2>




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