some mistakes in chapter 3 intro

Alex Groenewoud krisp at wanadoo.nl
Mon May 6 13:46:49 PDT 2002


The first sentence in the introduction to chapter 3 contains a
grammatical error: "are needed to download for building".
The second one too: "versions ... that is known to work".

And the third paragraph speaks of a list of official download sites
that since has been distributed over the descriptions of the respective
packages.

The attached file repairs these mistakes.
And then tries to further improve the text.

Hope this is of use.

Alex
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