cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/chapter03 introduction.xml

gerard at linuxfromscratch.org gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue May 7 08:10:58 PDT 2002


gerard      02/05/07 08:10:58

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   <title>Introduction</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter03"?>
   
  -<para>Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for 
  -building the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of
  -the software that is known to work and which this book is based on. 
  -If you 
  -experience problems which you can't solve yourself, then please download the
  -version that
  -is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version).</para>
  +<para>Below follows a list of all the packages that you will need to
  +download in order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version
  +numbers correspond to versions of the software that are known to work and
  +which this book is based upon.</para>
   
  -<para>All the URL's below are to the ftp.linuxfromscratch.org server. We
  -have a couple of FTP mirrors available from which you can download the
  -files as well. The addresses of the mirror sites can be found in 
  -<xref linkend="ch01-mirrors"/>.</para>
  +<para>All the URL's below refer to the main LFS server. There are several
  +FTP mirrors available from which you can download the files as well. The
  +addresses of these can be found in <xref linkend="ch01-mirrors"/>.</para>
   
  -<para>We have provided a list of official download sites of the packages below
  -in <xref linkend="appendixa"/>. The LFS FTP archive only 
  -contains the versions of packages that are recommended for use in this book. 
  -You can check the official sites in Appendix A to determine whether a newer 
  -package is available. If you do download a newer package, we would 
  -appreciate hearing whether you were able to install the package using this 
  -book's instructions or not.</para>
  -
  -<para>Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files
  -compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to
  -handle bz2 files, check out <xref linkend="ch02-install"/>.</para>
  +<para>The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of the packages that
  +are used in this book. You can check the official download sites provided
  +in <xref linkend="appendixa"/> to determine whether or not a newer package
  +is available. If you do download a newer package, we would appreciate
  +hearing whether you were able to install the package without any problems
  +using this book's instructions.</para>
   
   </sect1>
   
  
  
  
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