cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/chapter07 introduction.xml loadkeys.xml network.xml

gerard at linuxfromscratch.org gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu May 16 11:40:05 PDT 2002


gerard      02/05/16 11:40:05

  Modified:    BOOK/appendixa bootscripts-desc.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 changelog.xml how.xml
               BOOK/chapter02 download.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 installasuser.xml introduction.xml
               BOOK/chapter06 config-keyboard.xml
               BOOK/chapter07 introduction.xml loadkeys.xml network.xml
  Log:
  fixed setup to 'set up'
  
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  1.4       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml
  
  Index: bootscripts-desc.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- bootscripts-desc.xml	6 Feb 2002 23:15:46 -0000	1.3
  +++ bootscripts-desc.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.4
  @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
   or aren't network based.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>network</title>
  -<para>The network script setup network interfaces (such as network cards)
  +<para>The network script sets up network interfaces (such as network cards)
   and sets up the default gateway where applicable.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>rc</title>
  
  
  
  1.282     +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
  
  Index: changelog.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.281 -r1.282
  --- changelog.xml	16 May 2002 18:39:22 -0000	1.281
  +++ changelog.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.282
  @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
   here hinted towards the fact that you could skip configuring this step
   which isn't true unless the entire script would be removed. So the text was
   changed a bit to just have them create the file no matter how the hardware
  -clock is setup.</para></listitem>
  +clock is set up.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para>March 11th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 07 - Loadkeys: Removed
   the need to configure a <filename>/etc/sysconfig/keyboard</filename> file.
  @@ -497,7 +497,7 @@
   installation.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para>January 15th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 7: Removed most of the
  -scripts, only left the part of a few where we setup up config files in
  +scripts, only left the part of a few where we set up config files in
   /etc/sysconfig.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para>January 15th, 2002 [gerard]: Chapter 6 - Configuring
  
  
  
  1.14      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
  
  Index: how.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
  --- how.xml	25 Sep 2001 23:42:44 -0000	1.13
  +++ how.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.14
  @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
   simply switch to a different VC (Virtual Console) or X desktop and
   continue using your computer as you normally would.</para>
   
  -<para>When all the software is installed, chapter 7 will setup the boot
  -scripts. Chapter 8 will setup the Linux boot loader and in chapter 9
  +<para>When all the software is installed, chapter 7 will set up the boot
  +scripts. Chapter 8 will set up the Linux boot loader and in chapter 9
   there are some pointers what you can do after you finish the book. Then
   you can finally reboot your system into your new LFS system, and start
   to really use it.</para>
  
  
  
  1.12      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter02/download.xml
  
  Index: download.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter02/download.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.11
  retrieving revision 1.12
  diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
  --- download.xml	29 Apr 2002 15:06:46 -0000	1.11
  +++ download.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.12
  @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
   into the LFS system. $LFS/usr/src is just a logical place to store source
   code, but by no means a requirement. You may even want to create a
   subdirectory under $LFS/usr/src for tarball storage. That way you can
  -seperate tarballs from temporary build directories, but again that's up
  +separate tarballs from temporary build directories, but again that's up
   to you.</para>
   
   <para>The next chapter contains a list of all the packages that need to be
  
  
  
  1.9       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/installasuser.xml
  
  Index: installasuser.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/installasuser.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.8
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  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- installasuser.xml	5 Mar 2002 20:12:03 -0000	1.8
  +++ installasuser.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.9
  @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   <para>Now you can login as user "lfs". You can do this two ways: either
   the normal way through the console or the display manager, or with
   <userinput>su - lfs</userinput>. When you're working as user "lfs", type
  -the following commands to setup a good environment to work in:</para>
  +the following commands to set up a good environment to work in:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>cat > ~/.bash_profile << "EOF"
   umask 022
  
  
  
  1.12      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/introduction.xml
  
  Index: introduction.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/introduction.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.11
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  diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
  --- introduction.xml	25 Sep 2001 23:55:44 -0000	1.11
  +++ introduction.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.12
  @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   that, often, C standards changed and packages still use the old standard 
   which is not a problem).</para>
   
  -<para>Before we start, make sure the LFS environment variable is setup
  +<para>Before we start, make sure the LFS environment variable is set up
   properly if you decided to make use of it. Run the following:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>echo $LFS</userinput></screen></para>
  
  
  
  1.5       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/config-keyboard.xml
  
  Index: config-keyboard.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/config-keyboard.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
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  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- config-keyboard.xml	2 May 2002 20:15:02 -0000	1.4
  +++ config-keyboard.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.5
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   
   <para><screen><userinput>ln -s i386/qwerty/nl.map.gz /usr/share/kbd/keymaps/defkeymap.map.gz</userinput></screen></para>
   
  -<para>An second option to configure your keyboard's layout is to compile
  +<para>A second option to configure your keyboard's layout is to compile
   the keymap directly into the kernel. This will make sure that your
   keyboard always works as expected, even when you have booted into
   maintenance mode (by passing `init=/bin/sh' to the kernel) in which case
  
  
  
  1.16      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter07/introduction.xml
  
  Index: introduction.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter07/introduction.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.15
  retrieving revision 1.16
  diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
  --- introduction.xml	21 Apr 2002 13:01:52 -0000	1.15
  +++ introduction.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.16
  @@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter07"?>
   
  -<para>This chapter will setup the bootscripts that you installed in chapter
  +<para>This chapter will set up the bootscripts that you installed in chapter
   6. Most of these scripts will work without needing to modify them, but a
  -few do require additional configuration files setup as they deal with
  +few do require additional configuration files set up as they deal with
   hardware dependent information.</para>
   
   </sect1>
  
  
  
  1.26      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter07/loadkeys.xml
  
  Index: loadkeys.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter07/loadkeys.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.25 -r1.26
  --- loadkeys.xml	7 Apr 2002 04:26:11 -0000	1.25
  +++ loadkeys.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.26
  @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   
   <para>If you decided to compile your keymap file directly into the kernel
   back at the end of chapter 6, then you strictly speaking don't need to run
  -this loadkeys script, since the kernel has already setup the keymap for
  +this loadkeys script, since the kernel has already set up the keymap for
   you. You can still run it if you want, it isn't going to hurt you. It could
   even be beneficial to keep it in case you run a lot of different kernels
   and don't remember or want to compile the keymap into every kernel you lay
  
  
  
  1.18      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml
  
  Index: network.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
  --- network.xml	5 Apr 2002 03:22:04 -0000	1.17
  +++ network.xml	16 May 2002 18:40:04 -0000	1.18
  @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Configuring default gateway</title>
   
  -<para>If you're on a network you may need to setup the default gateway for
  +<para>If you're on a network you may need to set up the default gateway for
   this machine. This is done by adding the proper values to the
   /etc/sysconfig/network file by running the following:</para>
   
  
  
  
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