cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/chapter07 hosts.xml

gerard at linuxfromscratch.org gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu May 23 10:01:16 PDT 2002


gerard      02/05/23 10:01:16

  Modified:    BOOK/appendixa autoconf-desc.xml bootscripts-desc.xml
                        e2fsprogs-desc.xml groff-desc.xml gzip-desc.xml
                        kbd-desc.xml nettools-desc.xml procps-desc.xml
                        reiserfs-desc.xml shadowpwd-desc.xml
                        shellutils-desc.xml texinfo-desc.xml
                        utillinux-desc.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 acknowledgements.xml
               BOOK/chapter03 autoconf.xml bash.xml tar-patch.xml
               BOOK/chapter04 creatingpart.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 bash-exp.xml bash-inst.xml
               BOOK/chapter07 hosts.xml
  Log:
  missing periods at ends of sentences
  
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  1.8       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/autoconf-desc.xml
  
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  --- autoconf-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:00:34 -0000	1.7
  +++ autoconf-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.8
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>autoheader</title>
   <para>The autoheader program can create a template file of C #define
  -statements for configure to use</para></sect4>
  +statements for configure to use.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>autoreconf</title>
   <para>If there are a lot of autoconf-generated configure scripts, the
  
  
  
  1.5       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/bootscripts-desc.xml
  
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  +++ bootscripts-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.5
  @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
   <sect4><title>checkfs</title>
   <para>The checkfs script checks the file systems just before they are
   mounted (with the exception of journal and network based file
  -systems)</para></sect4>
  +systems).</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>cleanfs</title>
   <para>The cleanfs script removes files that shouldn't be preserved between
  
  
  
  1.7       +4 -4      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/e2fsprogs-desc.xml
  
  Index: e2fsprogs-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
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  --- e2fsprogs-desc.xml	18 May 2002 17:52:35 -0000	1.6
  +++ e2fsprogs-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.7
  @@ -14,12 +14,12 @@
   
   <sect4><title>chattr</title>
   <para>chattr changes the file attributes on a Linux second extended file
  -system. </para></sect4>
  +system.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>compile_et</title>
   <para>compile_et is used to convert a table listing error-code names
   and associated messages into a C source file suitable for use with the 
  -com_err library</para></sect4>
  +com_err library.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>debugfs</title>
   <para>The debugfs program is a file system debugger. It can be used  to examine 
  @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>e2image</title>
   <para>e2image is used to save critical ext2 filesystem data to 
  -a file</para></sect4>
  +a file.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>e2label</title>
   <para>e2label will display or change the filesystem label on the ext2 
  @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>fsck.ext3</title>
   <para>fsck.ext3 is used to check and optionally repair a Linux ext3 
  -filesystems</para></sect4>
  +filesystems.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>lsattr</title>
   <para>lsattr lists the file attributes on a second extended 
  
  
  
  1.8       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/groff-desc.xml
  
  Index: groff-desc.xml
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  --- groff-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.7
  +++ groff-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.8
  @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>tfmtodit</title>
   <para>tfmtodit creates a font file for use with <userinput>groff
  --Tdvi</userinput></para></sect4>
  +-Tdvi</userinput>.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>troff</title>
   <para>troff is highly compatible with Unix troff. Usually it should be invoked 
  
  
  
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  --- gzip-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.12
  +++ gzip-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.13
  @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
   <sect4><title>zcat</title>
   <para>zcat uncompresses either a list of files on the command line or its 
   standard input and writes the uncompressed data on 
  -standard output</para></sect4>
  +standard output.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>zcmp</title>
   <para>zcmp invokes the cmp program on compressed files.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.9       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/kbd-desc.xml
  
  Index: kbd-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
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  --- kbd-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.8
  +++ kbd-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.9
  @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
   features are built into setfont.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>openvt</title>
  -<para>openvt starts a program on a new virtual terminal (VT)</para></sect4>
  +<para>openvt starts a program on a new virtual terminal (VT).</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>psfaddtable, psfgettable, psfstriptable, psfxtable</title>
   <para>These are a set of tools for handling Unicode character tables for 
  
  
  
  1.9       +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/nettools-desc.xml
  
  Index: nettools-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
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  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- nettools-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.8
  +++ nettools-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.9
  @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>hostname</title>
   <para>hostname is used to set or show the system's
  -hostname</para></sect4>
  +hostname.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>ifconfig</title>
   <para>The ifconfig command is the general command used to configure network
  @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>nameif</title>
   <para>nameif names network interfaces based on MAC
  -addresses</para></sect4>
  +addresses.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>netstat</title>
   <para>netstat is a multi-purpose tool used to print the network connections, 
  
  
  
  1.7       +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/procps-desc.xml
  
  Index: procps-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/procps-desc.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- procps-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.6
  +++ procps-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.7
  @@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
   <para>ps gives a snapshot of the current processes.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>pgrep</title>
  -<para>pgrep looks up processes based on name and other attributes</para></sect4>
  +<para>pgrep looks up processes based on name and other attributes.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>pkill</title>
  -<para>pkill signals processes based on name and other attributes</para></sect4>
  +<para>pkill signals processes based on name and other attributes.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>skill</title>
   <para>skill sends signals to process matching a criteria.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/reiserfs-desc.xml
  
  Index: reiserfs-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/reiserfs-desc.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- reiserfs-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.3
  +++ reiserfs-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.4
  @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>resize_reiserfs</title>
   <para>resize_reiserfs is used to resize an unmounted reiserfs file 
  -system</para></sect4>
  +system.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>unpack</title>
   <para>No description is currently available.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.9       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/shadowpwd-desc.xml
  
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  --- shadowpwd-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:00:34 -0000	1.8
  +++ shadowpwd-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.9
  @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
   maintains failure counts and limits.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>gpasswd</title>
  -<para>gpasswd is used to administer the /etc/group file</para></sect4>
  +<para>gpasswd is used to administer the /etc/group file.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>groupadd</title>
   <para>The groupadd command creates a new group account using the values 
  
  
  
  1.12      +5 -5      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/shellutils-desc.xml
  
  Index: shellutils-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
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  diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
  --- shellutils-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:00:34 -0000	1.11
  +++ shellutils-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.12
  @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
   host.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>hostname</title>
  -<para>hostname sets or prints the name of the current host system</para></sect4>
  +<para>hostname sets or prints the name of the current host system.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>id</title>
   <para>id prints the real and effective UIDs and GIDs of a user or the current
  @@ -61,14 +61,14 @@
   
   <sect4><title>nohup</title>
   <para>nohup runs a command immune to hangups, with output to a 
  -non-tty</para></sect4>
  +non-tty.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>pathchk</title>
   <para>pathchk checks whether file names are valid or portable.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>pinky</title>
   <para>pinky is a lightweight finger utility which retrieves information about
  -a certain user</para></sect4>
  +a certain user.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>printenv</title>
   <para>printenv prints all or part of the environment.</para></sect4>
  @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
   function).</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>pwd</title>
  -<para>pwd prints the name of the current/working directory</para></sect4>
  +<para>pwd prints the name of the current/working directory.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>seq</title>
   <para>seq prints numbers in a certain range with a certain 
  @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
   <para>stty changes and prints terminal line settings.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>su</title>
  -<para>su runs a shell with substitute user and group IDs</para></sect4>
  +<para>su runs a shell with substitute user and group ID's.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>tee</title>
   <para>tee reads from standard input and writes to standard output and 
  
  
  
  1.8       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/texinfo-desc.xml
  
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  ===================================================================
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  --- texinfo-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.7
  +++ texinfo-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.8
  @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   formats.  Available formats are: info files, plain text and HTML.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>texi2dvi</title>
  -<para>The texi2dvi program prints Texinfo documents</para></sect4>
  +<para>The texi2dvi program prints Texinfo documents.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>texindex</title>
   <para>The texindex program is used to sort Texinfo index files.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.10      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/utillinux-desc.xml
  
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  ===================================================================
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  diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
  --- utillinux-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.9
  +++ utillinux-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.10
  @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
   
   <sect4><title>blockdev</title>
   <para>blockdev allows to call block device ioctls from the command 
  -line</para></sect4>
  +line.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>cal</title>
   <para>cal displays a simple calender.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
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  Index: acknowledgements.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.37
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  diff -u -r1.37 -r1.38
  --- acknowledgements.xml	7 May 2002 13:59:54 -0000	1.37
  +++ acknowledgements.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.38
  @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
   project.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.mirror.ac.uk">UK Mirror
  -Service</ulink> for running the linuxfromscratch.mirror.co.uk mirror</para></listitem>
  +Service</ulink> for running the linuxfromscratch.mirror.co.uk mirror.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:guido at primerelay.net">Guido
   Passet</ulink> <guido at primerelay.net> for running the
  @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
   
   <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:garrett at linux.com">Garrett
   LeSage</ulink> <garrett at linux.com> for creating the LFS 
  -banner</para></listitem>
  +banner.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:dean at vipersoft.co.uk">Dean
   Benson</ulink> <dean at vipersoft.co.uk> for helping out financially
  
  
  
  1.8       +0 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter03/autoconf.xml
  
  Index: autoconf.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/autoconf.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.7
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  diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
  --- autoconf.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:19 -0000	1.7
  +++ autoconf.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.8
  @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
   Autoconf (&autoconf-version;) - &autoconf-size;:
   <ulink url="&ftp;/autoconf-&autoconf-version;.tar.bz2"/>
   <ulink url="&http;/autoconf-&autoconf-version;.tar.bz2"/>
  -
  
  
  
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  Index: bash.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/bash.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- bash.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:19 -0000	1.8
  +++ bash.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.9
  @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
   Bash (&bash-version;) - &bash-size;:
   <ulink url="&ftp;/bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2"/>
   <ulink url="&http;/bash-&bash-version;.tar.bz2"/>
  -
  
  
  
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  Index: tar-patch.xml
  ===================================================================
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  retrieving revision 1.10
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  diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
  --- tar-patch.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:19 -0000	1.10
  +++ tar-patch.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.11
  @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
   Tar Patch (&tar-version;) - &tar-patch-size;:
   <ulink url="&ftp;/tar-1.13.patch.bz2"/>
   <ulink url="&http;/tar-1.13.patch.bz2"/>
  -
  
  
  
  1.19      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter04/creatingpart.xml
  
  Index: creatingpart.xml
  ===================================================================
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  retrieving revision 1.18
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  diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
  --- creatingpart.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:21 -0000	1.18
  +++ creatingpart.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.19
  @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
   but may be useful if you are short on disk space. If you feel brave, take 
   a look at the <emphasis>Install LFS next to existing systems on the same
   partition</emphasis> hint at <ulink 
  -url="&hints-root;lfs_next_to_existing_systems.txt"/></para>
  +url="&hints-root;lfs_next_to_existing_systems.txt"/>.</para>
   
   <para>Before we can build our new Linux system, we need to have an empty Linux
   partition on which we can build our new system. We recommend a partition size
  
  
  
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  Index: bash-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/bash-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.14
  retrieving revision 1.15
  diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
  --- bash-exp.xml	2 May 2002 20:15:00 -0000	1.14
  +++ bash-exp.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.15
  @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
   <title>Command explanations</title>
   
   <para><userinput>--enable-static-link:</userinput> This configure 
  -option causes Bash to be linked statically</para>
  +option causes bash to be linked statically.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>--prefix=$LFS/usr:</userinput> This configure option installs 
   all of Bash's files under the $LFS/usr directory, which becomes the /usr 
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   mounted you need and will want to have bash available (it will be hard to 
   execute the boot scripts without a shell for instance).</para>
   
  -<para><userinput>--with-curses:</userinput> This causes Bash to be 
  +<para><userinput>--with-curses:</userinput> This causes bash to be
   linked against the curses library instead of the default termcap 
   library which is becoming obsolete.</para>
   
  @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
   against libncurses (it can link against a static termcap for the time
   being just fine because we will reinstall Bash in chapter 6 anyways,
   where we will use libncurses), but it's a good test to make sure that
  -the ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
  +the Ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
   trouble later on in this chapter when you install the Texinfo package.
  -That package requires ncurses and termcap can't reliably be used
  +That package requires ncurses, and termcap can't reliably be used
   there.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>ln -sf bash $LFS/bin/sh:</userinput> This command creates
  @@ -35,11 +35,11 @@
   (as closely as possible) as the original Bourne shell.</para>
   
   <para>The <userinput>&&</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
  -the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists 
  +the next command to be executed only if the previous command exits
   with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
  -commands are copy&pasted on the shell, it is important to be ensured
  -that if ./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make
  -fails, that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.</para>
  +commands are copy&pasted on the shell, it is important to ensure
  +that if ./configure fails, make isn't executed and, likewise, if make
  +fails, that make install isn't executed, and so forth.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
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  Index: bash-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/bash-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.26
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  diff -u -r1.26 -r1.27
  --- bash-inst.xml	2 May 2002 20:15:00 -0000	1.26
  +++ bash-inst.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.27
  @@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
   distribution is an LFS system, all files will be present if you followed
   the instructions of the book version you read exactly.</para>
   
  -<para>If both of the files are missing, you have to install the ncurses 
  +<para>If both of the files are missing, you have to install the Ncurses
   development package. This package is often called something like 
  -<emphasis>ncurses-dev</emphasis>. If this package is already installed, 
  +<emphasis>Ncurses-dev</emphasis>. If this package is already installed,
   or you just installed it, check for the two files again. Often the 
   <filename>libcurses.a</filename> file is (still) missing. If so, then 
   create <filename>libcurses.a</filename> as a symlink by running the 
  
  
  
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  Index: hosts.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter07/hosts.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.12
  retrieving revision 1.13
  diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
  --- hosts.xml	17 Mar 2002 19:04:09 -0000	1.12
  +++ hosts.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:16 -0000	1.13
  @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
   	C     192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen></para>
   
   <para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this IP could
  -be www.linuxfromscratch.org</para>
  +be www.linuxfromscratch.org.</para>
   
   <para>If you aren't going to use a network card, you still need to 
   come up with a FQDN. This is necessary for certain programs to operate
  
  
  
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