cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/entities flex.ent gettext.ent

gerard at linuxfromscratch.org gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 26 14:25:09 PDT 2002


gerard      02/05/26 14:25:09

  Modified:    BOOK/appendixa autoconf-desc.xml diffutils-down.xml
                        fileutils-down.xml findutils-down.xml gawk-desc.xml
                        glibc-desc.xml kernel-down.xml m4-desc.xml
                        patch-desc.xml shadowpwd-down.xml
                        textutils-down.xml utillinux-down.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 newsserver.xml
               BOOK/chapter04 introduction.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 bzip2-inst.xml fileutils-inst.xml gcc-exp.xml
                        installasuser.xml introduction.xml make-inst.xml
                        patch-exp.xml shellutils-inst.xml
                        utillinux-inst.xml whystatic.xml
               BOOK/chapter06 e2fsprogs-exp.xml introduction.xml
                        manpages-inst.xml shellutils-inst.xml
                        utillinux-inst.xml
               BOOK/entities flex.ent gettext.ent
  Log:
  Applied Alex Groenewoud's namesandspaces.dat patch
  
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  1.9       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/autoconf-desc.xml
  
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  --- autoconf-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:01:15 -0000	1.8
  +++ autoconf-desc.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.9
  @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   <sect4><title>autoconf</title>
   <para>autoconf is a tool for producing shell scripts that automatically
   configure software source code packages to adapt to many kinds of
  -UNIX-like systems.  The configuration scripts produced by autoconf are
  +Unix-like systems.  The configuration scripts produced by autoconf are
   independent of autoconf when they are run, so their users do not need to
   have autoconf.</para></sect4>
   
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/diffutils-down.xml
  
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  --- diffutils-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ diffutils-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>Diff Utils (&diffutils-version;): 
  +<para><literallayout>Diffutils (&diffutils-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/diffutils/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
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  --- fileutils-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ fileutils-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>File Utils (&fileutils-version;): 
  +<para><literallayout>Fileutils (&fileutils-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/fileutils/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
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  --- findutils-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ findutils-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>Find Utils (&findutils-version;): 
  +<para><literallayout>Findutils (&findutils-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/findutils/"/>
   
  -Find Utils Patch (&findutils-version;):
  +Findutils Patch (&findutils-version;):
   <ulink url="&ftp;/"/>
   <ulink url="&http;/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gawk-desc.xml
  
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  --- gawk-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.2
  +++ gawk-desc.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2><title>Contents of Gawk-&gawk-contversion;</title>
   
  -<para>Not yet checked</para>
  +<para>(Not checked yet.)</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
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  diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
  --- glibc-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:04:35 -0000	1.15
  +++ glibc-desc.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.16
  @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
   multi-threaded programs.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>libutil, libutil_p</title>
  -<para>Contains code for "standard" functions used in many different unix
  +<para>Contains code for "standard" functions used in many different Unix
   utilities.</para></sect4>
   
   </sect3>
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/kernel-down.xml
  
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- kernel-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ kernel-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>Linux Kernel (&kernel-version;): 
  +<para><literallayout>Linux (&kernel-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.kernel.org/pub/linux/kernel/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.7       +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/m4-desc.xml
  
  Index: m4-desc.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/m4-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.6
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  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- m4-desc.xml	23 May 2002 17:00:34 -0000	1.6
  +++ m4-desc.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.7
  @@ -8,8 +8,8 @@
   <sect4><title>m4</title>
   <para>m4 is a macro processor. It copies input to output expanding macros as it
   goes. Macros are either built-in or user-defined and can take any number
  -of arguments. Besides just doing macro expansion m4 has built-in functions 
  -for including named files, running UNIX commands, doing integer arithmetic, 
  +of arguments. Besides just doing macro expansion, m4 has built-in functions
  +for including named files, running Unix commands, doing integer arithmetic,
   manipulating text in various ways, recursion, etc. The m4 program can be used either
   as a front-end to a compiler or as a macro processor in its own
   right.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
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  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- patch-desc.xml	19 Apr 2002 18:27:00 -0000	1.5
  +++ patch-desc.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.6
  @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@
   file usually is a list created by the diff program that contains
   instructions on how an original file needs to be modified. Patch is used
   a lot for source code patches since it saves time and space. Imagine
  -a package that is 1MB in size. The next version of that package
  +a package that is 1 MB in size. The next version of that package
   only has changes in two files of the first version. It can be shipped as an
  -entirely new package of 1MB or just as a patch file of 1KB which will
  +entirely new package of 1 MB or just as a patch file of 1 KB which will
   update the first version to make it identical to the second version. So
   if the first version was downloaded already, a patch file avoids
   a second large download.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/shadowpwd-down.xml
  
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  retrieving revision 1.2
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- shadowpwd-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ shadowpwd-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>Shadow Password Suite (&shadow-version;):
  +<para><literallayout>Shadow (&shadow-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.pld.org.pl/software/shadow/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
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  retrieving revision 1.2
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- textutils-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ textutils-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:08 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>Text Utils (&textutils-version;):
  +<para><literallayout>Textutils (&textutils-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.gnu.org/gnu/textutils/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
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  --- utillinux-down.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:17 -0000	1.2
  +++ utillinux-down.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Official Download Location</title>
   
  -<para><literallayout>Util Linux (&util-linux-version;):
  +<para><literallayout>Util-linux (&util-linux-version;):
   <ulink url="ftp://ftp.win.tue.nl/pub/linux-local/utils/util-linux/"/></literallayout></para>
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/newsserver.xml
  
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  retrieving revision 1.2
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- newsserver.xml	7 Nov 2001 15:42:16 -0000	1.2
  +++ newsserver.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.3
  @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
   will be copied to the correspondent newsgroup, and vice versa.</para>
   
   <para>The news server can be reached at
  -<emphasis>news.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis></para>
  +<emphasis>news.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis>.</para>
   
   </sect1>
   
  
  
  
  1.7       +2 -3      LFS/BOOK/chapter04/introduction.xml
  
  Index: introduction.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter04/introduction.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.6
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  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- introduction.xml	25 Sep 2001 23:48:31 -0000	1.6
  +++ introduction.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.7
  @@ -3,9 +3,8 @@
   <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter04"?>
   
   <para>In this chapter, the partition that is going to host the LFS system is
  -going to be prepared. We will be creating the partition itself, a file
  -system and the directory structure. When this is done, we can move on
  -to the next chapter and start the actual building process.</para>
  +prepared. We will create the partition itself, make a file
  +system on it, and mount it.</para>
   
   </sect1>
   
  
  
  
  1.19      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/bzip2-inst.xml
  
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  retrieving revision 1.18
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  diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
  --- bzip2-inst.xml	25 May 2002 00:19:46 -0000	1.18
  +++ bzip2-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.19
  @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   plain tar, you have to use constructions like bzcat file.tar.bz|tar
   xv or tar --use-compress-prog=bunzip2 -xvf file.tar.bz2 to use bzip2 and
   bunzip2 with tar. This patch provides the -j option so you can unpack a
  -Bzip2 archive with tar xvfj file.tar.bz2. Applying this patch will be
  +bzip2'ed archive with tar xvfj file.tar.bz2. Applying this patch will be
   mentioned later on when the Tar package is installed.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
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  --- fileutils-inst.xml	25 May 2002 13:56:32 -0000	1.36
  +++ fileutils-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.37
  @@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
   
   <para>The programs from a statically linked Fileutils package may cause
   segmentation faults on certain systems, if your distribution has
  -Glibc-2.2.3 or higher installed. It also seems to happen mostly on machines
  +Glibc-2.2.3 or higher installed. It seems to happen mostly on machines
   powered by an AMD CPU, but there is a case or two where an Intel system
  -is affected as well. If your system falls under this category, try the
  +is affected as well. If your system falls in this category, try the
   following fix.</para>
   
   <para>Note that in some cases using these sed commands will result in
  -problems not being able to compile this package at all, even when your
  +not being able to compile this package at all, even when your
   system has an AMD CPU and has Glibc-2.2.3 (or higher) installed. If that's 
   the case, you'll need to remove the fileutils-&fileutils-version; directory
   and unpack it again from the tarball before continuing. We believe this
  
  
  
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  --- gcc-exp.xml	5 Apr 2002 19:21:29 -0000	1.20
  +++ gcc-exp.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.21
  @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
   <title>Command explanations</title>
   
   <para><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../gcc-&gcc-patch-version;.patch:</userinput>
  -This new patch deals with incorrect handling of weak symbols, the 
  -over-optimization of calls to those weak symbols, an atexit issue and
  +This patch deals with the incorrect handling of weak symbols, the 
  +over-optimization of calls to those weak symbols, an atexit issue, and
   the  __dso_handle symbol required for atexit's proper function.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>make BOOT_LDFLAGS=-static:</userinput>
  
  
  
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  --- installasuser.xml	25 May 2002 00:19:46 -0000	1.10
  +++ installasuser.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.11
  @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
   source ~/.bash_profile</userinput></screen></para>
   
   <para>This profile makes sure the umask is set to 022 so newly created
  -files and directories will have the correct permission. It is advisable
  +files and directories will have the correct permissions. It is advisable
   to keep this setting throughout your LFS installation. Also, the $LFS
   and $LC_ALL environment variables are set. $LFS has been explained in
   previous chapters already. $LC_ALL is a variable that is used for
  
  
  
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  Index: introduction.xml
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  --- introduction.xml	25 May 2002 00:19:46 -0000	1.13
  +++ introduction.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.14
  @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
   
   <para>All the files from this chapter will be installed under the <filename
   class="directory">$LFS/static</filename> directory. By doing it this way,
  -we keep the installation from this chapter seperate from the final
  +we keep the installation from this chapter separate from the final
   installation in the next chapter. Everything done here is only temporarily
   so we don't want it to pollute the to-be LFS system.</para>
   
  
  
  
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  diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
  --- make-inst.xml	25 May 2002 00:19:46 -0000	1.7
  +++ make-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.8
  @@ -14,10 +14,10 @@
   otherwise the `-l' option will probably not work. You may need special
   privileges to complete the installation of /mnt/lfs/static/bin/make.</screen></blockquote>
   
  -<para>You can safely ignore this warning. make doesn't need to be owned by
  -group kmem and setgid for the <emphasis>-l</emphasis> option to work (which
  -you can use to tell make not to start any new jobs when a certain load on
  -the system is reached).</para>
  +<para>You can safely ignore this warning. The make program doesn't actually need to be owned by
  +group kmem and setgid for the <emphasis>-l</emphasis> option to work. (This option
  +tells make not to start any new jobs when a certain load on
  +the system has been reached.)</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
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  retrieving revision 1.2
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- patch-exp.xml	30 Jan 2002 23:57:20 -0000	1.2
  +++ patch-exp.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.3
  @@ -2,10 +2,9 @@
   <title>Command explanations</title>
   
   <para><userinput>CPPFLAGS=-D_GNU_SOURCE: </userinput>
  -Adding <userinput>-D_GNU_SOURCE</userinput> to CPPFLAGS command before
  -we configure patch fixes installation of the package on PPC and m68k
  -platforms (that we know of).  It also doesn't hurt compilation on other
  -platforms (such as x86) so we do it by default.</para>
  +This flag fixes installation problems of this package on PPC and m68k
  +platforms (that we know of).  It doesn't hurt compilation on other
  +platforms (such as x86); so we do it by default.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
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  --- shellutils-inst.xml	25 May 2002 00:19:46 -0000	1.24
  +++ shellutils-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.25
  @@ -14,9 +14,9 @@
   NOTE: to install su, run 'make install-root' as root</screen></blockquote>
   
   <para>You can safely ignore that warning. You need to be logged in as root
  -in order to install su the way sh-utils wants to install it, that being
  +in order to install su the way Sh-utils wants to install it, which is being
   suid root. Because we don't need su during chapter 6, and su will be properly
  -installed when we re-install sh-utils in chapter 6 anyways, you can just
  +installed when we re-install Sh-utils in chapter 6, you can just
   pretend you didn't see it.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
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  --- utillinux-inst.xml	25 May 2002 00:21:12 -0000	1.1
  +++ utillinux-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.2
  @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
   <sect2>
  -<title>Installation of Util-Linux</title>
  +<title>Installation of Util-linux</title>
   
   <para>We only need the mount and umount programs at the moment, so we won't
   be compiling the entire package.</para>
   
  -<para>Install Util-Linux by running the following commands:</para>
  +<para>Install Util-linux by running the following commands:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>./configure &&
   make -C lib &&
  
  
  
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  --- whystatic.xml	21 Apr 2002 13:01:51 -0000	1.6
  +++ whystatic.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.7
  @@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
   <title>Why do we use static linking?</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="whystatic.html" dir="chapter05"?>
   
  -<para>Thanks to Plasmatic for posting the text on which this is mainly
  -based to one of the LFS mailing lists.</para>
  +<para>(Thanks to Plasmatic for posting the text on which this is mainly
  +based to one of the LFS mailing lists.)</para>
   
   <para>When making (compiling) a program, rather than having to rewrite all the
   functions for dealing with the kernel, hardware, files, etc. every time you
  @@ -16,15 +16,15 @@
   has.</para>
   
   <para>However, these libraries can be very large (for example, libc.a
  -can often be around 2.5MB), so you may not want a separate copy of each
  +can often be around 2.5 MB), so you may not want a separate copy of each
   library attached to the program. Just imagine if you had a simple command
  -like ls with an extra 2.5MB attached to it! Instead of making the library
  +like ls with an extra 2.5 MB attached to it! Instead of making the library
   an actual part of the program, or statically linked, the library is kept a
   separate file, which is loaded only when the program needs it. This is what
   we call dynamically linked, as the library is loaded and unloaded dynamically,
   as the program needs it.</para>
   
  -<para>So now we have a 1KB file and a 2.5MB file, but we still haven't saved any
  +<para>So now we have a 1 KB file and a 2.5 MB file, but we still haven't saved any
   space (except maybe RAM until the library is needed). The REAL advantage to
   dynamically linked libraries is that we only need one copy of the library.
   If <filename>ls</filename> and <filename>rm</filename> both use the same 
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml
  
  Index: e2fsprogs-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.2
  retrieving revision 1.3
  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- e2fsprogs-exp.xml	26 Sep 2001 16:33:08 -0000	1.2
  +++ e2fsprogs-exp.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.3
  @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   e2fsprogs Makefile. Some programs are essential for system use when,
   for example, /usr isn't mounted (like the e2fsck program).  These 
   programs and libraries therefore belong in directories like /lib and 
  -/sbin. If this option isn't passed to e2fsprogs' configure, it places 
  +/sbin. If this option isn't passed to E2fsprogs's configure, it places 
   these programs in /usr which  is not what we want.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>--enable-elf-shlibs:</userinput> This creates shared
  
  
  
  1.13      +11 -11    LFS/BOOK/chapter06/introduction.xml
  
  Index: introduction.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/introduction.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.12
  retrieving revision 1.13
  diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
  --- introduction.xml	25 May 2002 00:19:47 -0000	1.12
  +++ introduction.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.13
  @@ -2,24 +2,24 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter06"?>
    
  -<para>The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward and
  -you will probably think it's so much easier and shorter to give the generic 
  -installation instructions for each package and only explain how to 
  -install something if a certain package requires an alternate installation 
  -method. Although I agree on that, I choose to give the 
  -full instructions for each and every package. This is simply to avoid any 
  +<para>The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward, and
  +you will probably think it would be so much easier and shorter to give
  +the generic installation instructions for a package here and only explain
  +in full the installation of those packages that require an alternate
  +method. Although we agree with that, we choose to give the 
  +full instructions for each and every package, simply to avoid any 
   possible confusion and errors.</para>
   
   <para>Now would be a good time to take a look at the optimization hint 
  -at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/> if you plan on using 
  +at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/> if you plan to use 
   compiler optimization for the packages
  -installed in the following chapter. Compiler optimization can make a program run
  -faster, but may also cause some compilation problems. If you run into problems
  -after having used optimization, always try it without optimizing to see if 
  +installed in this chapter. Compiler optimization can make a program run
  +faster, but may also cause compilation problems. If you run into problems
  +when using optimization, always try it without optimization to see if 
   the problem persists.</para>
   
   <para>Please refrain from installing more than one package at a time, even
  -if it may safe you time (especially with dual CPU machines). If you install
  +if it may save you time (especially with dual CPU machines). If you install
   the wrong package at the wrong time, it may hard-wire program paths to
   <filename class="directory">$LFS/static</filename> which will cause the
   programs to stop working once the static directory is removed. The order
  
  
  
  1.10      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml
  
  Index: manpages-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/manpages-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.9
  retrieving revision 1.10
  diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
  --- manpages-inst.xml	21 Jan 2002 18:40:33 -0000	1.9
  +++ manpages-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.10
  @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Installation of Man-pages</title>
   
  -<para>Install Man-pages by running the following commands:</para>
  +<para>Install Man-pages by running the following command:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
   
  
  
  
  1.16      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml
  
  Index: shellutils-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.15
  retrieving revision 1.16
  diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
  --- shellutils-inst.xml	21 May 2002 16:50:46 -0000	1.15
  +++ shellutils-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.16
  @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>Installation of Sh-utils</title>
   
  -<para>Install Shellutils by running the following commands:</para>
  +<para>Install Sh-utils by running the following commands:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
   make &&
  
  
  
  1.24      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml
  
  Index: utillinux-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.23
  retrieving revision 1.24
  diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
  --- utillinux-inst.xml	2 May 2002 20:15:02 -0000	1.23
  +++ utillinux-inst.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.24
  @@ -13,9 +13,9 @@
   </sect2>
   
   <sect2>
  -<title>Installation of Util-Linux</title>
  +<title>Installation of Util-linux</title>
   
  -<para>Install Util-Linux by running the following commands:</para>
  +<para>Install Util-linux by running the following commands:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>./configure &&
   make HAVE_SLN=yes &&
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/entities/flex.ent
  
  Index: flex.ent
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/entities/flex.ent,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- flex.ent	12 Apr 2002 16:14:30 -0000	1.1
  +++ flex.ent	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.2
  @@ -15,5 +15,5 @@
   <!ENTITY flex-dir "flex-&flex-version;">
   <!ENTITY flex-package "flex-&flex-version;.tar.bz2">
   
  -<!ENTITY flex-compsize "3MB">
  +<!ENTITY flex-compsize "3 MB">
   <!ENTITY flex-time "1 minute">
  
  
  
  1.2       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/entities/gettext.ent
  
  Index: gettext.ent
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/entities/gettext.ent,v
  retrieving revision 1.1
  retrieving revision 1.2
  diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
  --- gettext.ent	12 Apr 2002 16:14:30 -0000	1.1
  +++ gettext.ent	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.2
  @@ -16,5 +16,5 @@
   <!ENTITY gettext-dir "gettext-&gettext-version;">
   <!ENTITY gettext-package "gettext-&gettext-version;.tar.bz2">
   
  -<!ENTITY gettext-compsize "11MB">
  +<!ENTITY gettext-compsize "11 MB">
   <!ENTITY gettext-time "1 minute">
  
  
  
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