Some more editting -- Preface & Chap 1

Gerard Beekmans gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Fri May 31 04:47:14 PDT 2002


On Fri, May 31, 2002 at 12:06:02AM -0400, Scot Mc Pherson wrote:
> Find the patch to the XML tree at
> http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/~scot/LFS-BOOK-CVS-20020530-XML.patch

Patching your patch:

-<para>The alfs-discuss list discusses the development of ALFS, which
stands for
+<para>The alfs-discuss list discusses the development of ALFS, which os
short for

s/which os/which is/

And, just nitpicking:

-installation tool that can install an LFS system automatically.
<snip>
+installation tool that installs a LFS system automatically, thus speeding

I'm staying with "an LFS" instead of "a LFS". 'an' sounds better to me,
kind of how you'd write "an hour" instead of "a hour".

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