cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/chapter05 bash-exp.xml binutils-exp.xml installasuser.xml

timothy at linuxfromscratch.org timothy at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Sep 23 11:35:06 PDT 2002


timothy     02/09/23 11:35:06

  Modified:    BOOK     index.xml
               BOOK/appendixa binutils-desc.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 changelog.xml
               BOOK/chapter03 introduction.xml
               BOOK/chapter04 creatingpart.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 bash-exp.xml binutils-exp.xml
                        installasuser.xml
  Log:
  Applied Bill Maltby's grammatic-fixes patch.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.491     +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/index.xml
  
  Index: index.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/index.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.490
  retrieving revision 1.491
  diff -u -r1.490 -r1.491
  --- index.xml	22 Sep 2002 14:22:43 -0000	1.490
  +++ index.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:04 -0000	1.491
  @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
   
   <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
   
  -<!ENTITY version "20020922">
  -<!ENTITY releasedate "September 22nd, 2002">
  +<!ENTITY version "20020923">
  +<!ENTITY releasedate "September 23rd, 2002">
   
   <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
   <!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
  
  
  
  1.14      +5 -5      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/binutils-desc.xml
  
  Index: binutils-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/binutils-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.13
  retrieving revision 1.14
  diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
  --- binutils-desc.xml	14 Jun 2002 16:27:49 -0000	1.13
  +++ binutils-desc.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:04 -0000	1.14
  @@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
   the archive).</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>as</title>
  -<para>as is primarily intended to assemble the output of the GNU C compiler gcc 
  -for use by the linker ld.</para></sect4>
  +<para>as is primarily intended to assemble the output of the GNU C compiler,
  + gcc, for use by the linker ld.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>gasp</title>
   <para>gasp is the Assembler Macro Preprocessor.</para></sect4>
  @@ -60,8 +60,8 @@
   <para>readelf displays information about elf type binaries.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>size</title>
  -<para>size lists the section sizes --and the total size-- for each of the 
  -object files objfile in its argument  list. By default, one line of output is 
  +<para>size lists the section sizes --and the total size-- for each of the
  +object files in its argument list. By default, one line of output is
   generated for each object file or each module in an archive.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>strings</title>
  @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
   that are at least  4  characters  long (or the number specified with an
   option to the program) and are followed by an unprintable character. By 
   default, it only prints the strings from the initialized and loaded 
  -sections of object files; for other types of files, it prints the strings 
  +sections of object files. For other types of files, it prints the strings 
   from the whole file.</para>
   
   <para>strings is mainly useful for determining the contents of non-text files.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.380     +3 -0      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
  
  Index: changelog.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.379
  retrieving revision 1.380
  diff -u -r1.379 -r1.380
  --- changelog.xml	22 Sep 2002 14:22:43 -0000	1.379
  +++ changelog.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:05 -0000	1.380
  @@ -59,6 +59,9 @@
   </itemizedlist>
   </para></listitem>
   
  +<listitem><para>September 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 3,4,5: Applied
  +Bill Maltby's grammatic-fixes patch.</para></listitem>
  +
   <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 06: Applied Alex's
   grammatic-fixes patch.</para></listitem>
   
  
  
  
  1.17      +4 -4      LFS/BOOK/chapter03/introduction.xml
  
  Index: introduction.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter03/introduction.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.16
  retrieving revision 1.17
  diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
  --- introduction.xml	7 May 2002 15:10:58 -0000	1.16
  +++ introduction.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:05 -0000	1.17
  @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter03"?>
   
  -<para>Below follows a list of all the packages that you will need to
  -download in order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version
  -numbers correspond to versions of the software that are known to work and
  -which this book is based upon.</para>
  +<para>Below is a list of packages you need to download for building a
  +basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions
  +of the software that are known to work, and this book is based
  +upon them.</para>
   
   <para>All the URL's below refer to the main LFS server. There are several
   FTP mirrors available from which you can download the files as well. The
  
  
  
  1.22      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter04/creatingpart.xml
  
  Index: creatingpart.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter04/creatingpart.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.21
  retrieving revision 1.22
  diff -u -r1.21 -r1.22
  --- creatingpart.xml	15 Aug 2002 17:39:08 -0000	1.21
  +++ creatingpart.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:06 -0000	1.22
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   of at least 1 GB. This provides enough space to store the tarballs and
   compile all of the packages. You will probably need more space if you
   intend to install additional software and use the LFS system as your
  -primary Linux system. If a Linux Native partition is already available,
  +primary Linux system. If a Linux native partition is already available,
   this subsection can be skipped.</para>
   
   <para>Since your system memory can only hold a limited amount of data
  @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   <para>The cfdisk program (or another fdisk-like program) should be
   started with the appropriate hard disk as the argument (like /dev/hda
   if a new partition is to be created on the primary master IDE disk).
  -Using this program, create a Linux Native partition. Please refer to
  +Using this program, create a Linux native partition. Please refer to
   the documentation of your fdisk program (the man pages are often a
   good place to start) for information about creating Linux native
   partitions and writing partition tables.</para>
  
  
  
  1.18      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/bash-exp.xml
  
  Index: bash-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/bash-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.17
  retrieving revision 1.18
  diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
  --- bash-exp.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:27 -0000	1.17
  +++ bash-exp.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:06 -0000	1.18
  @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   <para>The <userinput>&&</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
   the next command to be executed only if the previous command exits
   with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
  -commands are copy&pasted on the shell, it is important to ensure
  +commands are copy & pasted on the shell, it is important to ensure
   that if ./configure fails, make isn't executed and, likewise, if make
   fails, that make install isn't executed, and so forth.</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.12      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/binutils-exp.xml
  
  Index: binutils-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/binutils-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.11
  retrieving revision 1.12
  diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
  --- binutils-exp.xml	26 May 2002 20:48:08 -0000	1.11
  +++ binutils-exp.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:06 -0000	1.12
  @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   instead of compiling the package inside the source tree. So, we create a
   binutils-build directory and work from there.</para>
   
  -<para><userinput>--disable-nls:</userinput> This option disabled
  +<para><userinput>--disable-nls:</userinput> This option disables
   internationalization (also known as i18n). We don't need this for our
   static programs and nls often causes problems when you're linking
   statically.</para>
  
  
  
  1.15      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/installasuser.xml
  
  Index: installasuser.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/installasuser.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.14
  retrieving revision 1.15
  diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
  --- installasuser.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:27 -0000	1.14
  +++ installasuser.xml	23 Sep 2002 18:35:06 -0000	1.15
  @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
   internationalization.</para>
   
   <para>When your host distribution uses a glibc version older than 2.2.4,
  -having $LC_ALL set to something else than "C" or "POSIX" while working
  +having $LC_ALL set to something other than "C" or "POSIX" while working
   through Chapter 5 may cause trouble when you exit the chroot environment
   of Chapter 6 and try to return to it. By setting this to "POSIX" ("C"
   is an alias for "POSIX") we ensure that everything will work as expected
  
  
  
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