cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/chapter05 gcc-exp.xml patch-exp.xml shellutils-inst.xml

timothy at linuxfromscratch.org timothy at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Sep 23 21:52:43 PDT 2002


timothy     02/09/23 21:52:43

  Modified:    BOOK/appendixa fileutils-desc.xml findutils-desc.xml
                        gawk-desc.xml gcc-desc.xml gzip-desc.xml
                        texinfo-desc.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 changelog.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 gcc-exp.xml patch-exp.xml shellutils-inst.xml
  Log:
  Applied Bill's chapter 5 fixes patch.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.9       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/fileutils-desc.xml
  
  Index: fileutils-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/fileutils-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.8
  retrieving revision 1.9
  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- fileutils-desc.xml	4 Jun 2002 11:30:13 -0000	1.8
  +++ fileutils-desc.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.9
  @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
   <para>mkfifo creates a FIFO with each given name.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>mknod</title>
  -<para>mknod creates a FIFO, character special file, or block special file 
  +<para>mknod creates a FIFO, character special file or block special file 
   with the given file name.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>mv</title>
  
  
  
  1.12      +7 -7      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/findutils-desc.xml
  
  Index: findutils-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/findutils-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.11
  retrieving revision 1.12
  diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
  --- findutils-desc.xml	4 Jun 2002 11:30:13 -0000	1.11
  +++ findutils-desc.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.12
  @@ -28,26 +28,26 @@
   4 to 5.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>locate</title>
  -<para>locate scans a database which contain all files and directories on a
  +<para>locate scans a database which contains all files and directories on a
   filesystem. This program lists the files and directories in this
   database matching a certain criteria. If a user is looking for a file this
   program will scan the database and tell him exactly where the files he
   requested are located. This only makes sense if the locate database is
  -fairly up-to-date else it will provide out-of-date information.</para></sect4>
  +fairly up-to-date, else it will provide out-of-date information.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>updatedb</title>
   <para>The updatedb program updates the locate database. It scans the entire
  -file system (including other file system that are currently mounted
  +file system (including other file systems that are currently mounted
   unless it is told not to do so) and puts every directory and file it finds
  -into the database that's used by the locate program which retrieves this
  +into the database that's used by the locate program, which retrieves this
   information. It's good practice to update this database once a day to
   have it up-to-date whenever it is needed.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>xargs</title>
   <para>The xargs command applies a command to a list of files. If there is 
  -a need to perform the same command on multiple files, a file can be created 
  -that contains all these files (one per line) and use xargs to perform that
  -command on the list.</para></sect4>
  +a need to perform the same command on multiple files, a list can be created 
  +that names all those files (one per line) and xargs can perform that
  +command on those files.</para></sect4>
   
   </sect3>
   
  
  
  
  1.6       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gawk-desc.xml
  
  Index: gawk-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gawk-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.5
  retrieving revision 1.6
  diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
  --- gawk-desc.xml	12 Jun 2002 01:10:26 -0000	1.5
  +++ gawk-desc.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.6
  @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   <para>awk is a symbolic link to gawk.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>gawk, gawk-3.1.1</title>
  -<para>gawk is the GNU implementation of the AWK,
  +<para>gawk is the GNU implementation of awk,
   a pattern scanning and processing language.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>grcat</title>
  
  
  
  1.18      +5 -7      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gcc-desc.xml
  
  Index: gcc-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gcc-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.17
  retrieving revision 1.18
  diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
  --- gcc-desc.xml	22 Sep 2002 14:22:43 -0000	1.17
  +++ gcc-desc.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.18
  @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
   file from one or more of these compiler generated object files.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>c++, cc1plus, g++</title>
  -<para>These are the C++ compiler; the equivalent of cc and 
  +<para>These are the C++ compiler, the equivalent of cc and 
   gcc etc.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>c++filt</title>
  @@ -31,12 +31,10 @@
   <para>collect2 assists with the compilation of constructors.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>cpp, cpp0</title>
  -<para>cpp pre-processes a source file, such as including
  -the contents of header files into the source file. It's a good idea to
  -not do this manually to save a lot of time. Someone just inserts a line
  -like #include <filename>. The preprocessor inserts the
  -contents of that file into the source file. That's one of the things a
  -preprocessor does.</para></sect4>
  +<para>cpp pre-processes a source file, such as including the contents of
  +header files into the source file. Simply add a line, such as #include
  +<filename>, to your source file. The preprocessor will insert the
  +contents of the included file into the source file.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>gccbug</title>
   <para>gccbug is a shell script which is used to simplify the creation of
  
  
  
  1.15      +3 -3      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gzip-desc.xml
  
  Index: gzip-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/gzip-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.14
  retrieving revision 1.15
  diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
  --- gzip-desc.xml	4 Jun 2002 11:30:13 -0000	1.14
  +++ gzip-desc.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.15
  @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
   Lempel-Ziv coding (LZ77).</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>zcat</title>
  -<para>zcat uncompresses either a list of files on the command line or its 
  -standard input and writes the uncompressed data on 
  -standard output.</para></sect4>
  +<para>zcat uncompresses either a list of files on the command line or a
  +file being read from its standard input. Then, that uncompressed data is
  +written to standard output.</para></sect4>
   
   <sect4><title>zcmp</title>
   <para>zcmp invokes the cmp program on compressed files.</para></sect4>
  
  
  
  1.11      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/appendixa/texinfo-desc.xml
  
  Index: texinfo-desc.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/appendixa/texinfo-desc.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.10
  retrieving revision 1.11
  diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
  --- texinfo-desc.xml	23 Jun 2002 19:47:11 -0000	1.10
  +++ texinfo-desc.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.11
  @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@
   
   <sect4><title>install-info</title>
   <para>The install-info program updates the info entries. When the info
  -program is run a list with available topics (ie: available info documents) will
  -be presented. The install-info program is used to maintain this list of
  +program is run, a list with available topics (ie: available info documents)
  +will be presented. The install-info program is used to maintain this list of
   available topics. If info files are removed manually, it is also necessary
   to delete the topic in the index file as well. This program is used for
   that. It also works the other way around when info documents are 
  
  
  
  1.382     +4 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
  
  Index: changelog.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.381
  retrieving revision 1.382
  diff -u -r1.381 -r1.382
  --- changelog.xml	23 Sep 2002 19:02:43 -0000	1.381
  +++ changelog.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.382
  @@ -60,8 +60,10 @@
   </para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para>September 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Applied Bill Maltby's
  -grammatic-fixes patch. Added <userinput>-</userinput> before
  -<userinput>tar</userinput> options (for clarity).</para></listitem>
  +grammatic-related patches.</para></listitem>
  +
  +<listitem><para>September 23rd, 2002 [timothy]: Added <userinput>-</userinput>
  +before <userinput>tar</userinput> options (for clarity).</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2002 [timothy]: Chapter 06: Applied Alex's
   grammatic-fixes patch.</para></listitem>
  
  
  
  1.31      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-exp.xml
  
  Index: gcc-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.30
  retrieving revision 1.31
  diff -u -r1.30 -r1.31
  --- gcc-exp.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:27 -0000	1.30
  +++ gcc-exp.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.31
  @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   packages to compile them statically.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>ln -s gcc $LFS/static/bin/cc:</userinput> This
  -creates the $LFS/static/bin/gcc symlink which some packages need.</para>
  +creates the $LFS/static/bin/gcc symlink, which some packages need.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/patch-exp.xml
  
  Index: patch-exp.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/patch-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- patch-exp.xml	26 May 2002 21:25:09 -0000	1.3
  +++ patch-exp.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.4
  @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <para><userinput>CPPFLAGS=-D_GNU_SOURCE: </userinput>
   This flag fixes installation problems of this package on PPC and m68k
   platforms (that we know of).  It doesn't hurt compilation on other
  -platforms (such as x86); so we do it by default.</para>
  +platforms, such as x86, so we do it by default.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.28      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/shellutils-inst.xml
  
  Index: shellutils-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/shellutils-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.27
  retrieving revision 1.28
  diff -u -r1.27 -r1.28
  --- shellutils-inst.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:27 -0000	1.27
  +++ shellutils-inst.xml	24 Sep 2002 04:52:43 -0000	1.28
  @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   applied. This patch is needed to avoid a conflict of variable names with
   certain Glibc versions (usually glibc-2.1.x) when compiling sh-utils
   statically. It is however safe to apply the patch even if you are running
  -a different glibc version, so if you aren't sure, it's best to apply
  +a different glibc version. So, if you aren't sure, it's best to apply
   it.</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../sh-utils-&sh-utils-version;.patch</userinput></screen></para>
  
  
  
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