cvs commit: LFS/BOOK/preface foreword.xml whonotread.xml whoread.xml

timothy at linuxfromscratch.org timothy at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Jan 13 05:26:45 PST 2003


timothy     03/01/13 08:26:45

  Modified:    BOOK     index.xml
               BOOK/chapter01 acknowledgements.xml blfsbook.xml blfsdev.xml
                        blfssupport.xml how.xml lfsbook.xml lfschat.xml
                        lfsdev.xml subscribe.xml
               BOOK/chapter05 fileutils-inst.xml
               BOOK/chapter06 config-shadowpwd.xml gcc-exp.xml
               BOOK/chapter07 setclock.xml
               BOOK/chapter09 whatnow.xml
               BOOK/preface foreword.xml whonotread.xml whoread.xml
  Log:
  Applied Billy's grammatical patch.
  
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  1.537     +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/index.xml
  
  Index: index.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/index.xml,v
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  retrieving revision 1.537
  diff -u -r1.536 -r1.537
  --- index.xml	11 Jan 2003 15:58:55 -0000	1.536
  +++ index.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.537
  @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
   
   <!ENTITY book SYSTEM "book/book.xml">
   
  -<!ENTITY version "20030111">
  -<!ENTITY releasedate "January 11th, 2003">
  +<!ENTITY version "20030113">
  +<!ENTITY releasedate "January 13th, 2003">
   
   <!ENTITY ftp-root "ftp://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
   <!ENTITY http-root "http://ftp.linuxfromscratch.org">
  
  
  
  1.42      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml
  
  Index: acknowledgements.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/acknowledgements.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.41
  retrieving revision 1.42
  diff -u -r1.41 -r1.42
  --- acknowledgements.xml	28 Sep 2002 18:46:59 -0000	1.41
  +++ acknowledgements.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.42
  @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   server.</para></listitem>
    
   <listitem><para><ulink url="http://www.valinux.com">VA Linux
  -Systems</ulink> for providing rackspace and bandwidth for the 
  +Systems</ulink> for providing rack space and bandwidth for the 
   linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem>
   
   <listitem><para><ulink url="http://fredan.org">Fredrik Danerklint</ulink>
  @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
   Benson</ulink> <dean at vipersoft.co.uk> for helping out financially
   with setting up the LFS non-profit organization.</para></listitem>
   
  -<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are
  +<listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailing lists who are
   making this book happen by giving their suggestions, testing the book
   and submitting bug reports.</para></listitem>
   
  
  
  
  1.5       +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/blfsbook.xml
  
  Index: blfsbook.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/blfsbook.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
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  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- blfsbook.xml	3 Jan 2003 02:14:20 -0000	1.4
  +++ blfsbook.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.5
  @@ -2,10 +2,10 @@
   <title>blfs-book</title>
   
   <para>The blfs-book list is used for coordinating
  -the BLFS Book's maintenance.
  +the BLFS book's maintenance.
   Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages.
   It is important that all development discussion
  -of interest to the Book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para>
  +of interest to the book's users take place on blfs-dev, not here.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/blfsdev.xml
  
  Index: blfsdev.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/blfsdev.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
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  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- blfsdev.xml	3 Jan 2003 02:14:20 -0000	1.3
  +++ blfsdev.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.4
  @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>blfs-dev</title>
   
  -<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS Book development.</para>
  +<para>The blfs-dev list is for discussion of BLFS book development.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.5       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/blfssupport.xml
  
  Index: blfssupport.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/blfssupport.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
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  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- blfssupport.xml	3 Jan 2003 02:14:20 -0000	1.4
  +++ blfssupport.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.5
  @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
   
   It does not include topics such as
   the price of beer, what hardware to buy,
  -or GNU versus BSD or Microsoft versus Linux flamewars.
  +or GNU versus BSD or Microsoft versus Linux flame wars.
   These belong on lfs-chat,
   and since blfs-support is high traffic,
   please follow this rule strictly.
  
  
  
  1.19      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
  
  Index: how.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.18
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  diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
  --- how.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:27 -0000	1.18
  +++ how.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.19
  @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
   
   <para>When all the software from Chapter 6 is installed, Chapters 7, 8 and 9
   will help us finalize our installation. We will set up our boot
  -scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final linux kernel and
  +scripts in Chapter 7. In Chapter 8 we will build our final Linux kernel and
   set up the Linux boot loader. Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after
   you finish the book. Then finally, you reboot your system and boot into your
   new LFS system, and start to really use it.</para>
  
  
  
  1.4       +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/lfsbook.xml
  
  Index: lfsbook.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/lfsbook.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- lfsbook.xml	3 Jan 2003 02:14:20 -0000	1.3
  +++ lfsbook.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.4
  @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>lfs-book</title>
   
  -<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS Book's maintenance.
  +<para>The lfs-book list is used for coordinating the LFS book's maintenance.
   Traffic on it is mostly Bugzilla and CVS commit messages.
   It is important that all development discussion
  -of interest to the Book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para>
  +of interest to the book's users take place on lfs-dev, not here.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/lfschat.xml
  
  Index: lfschat.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/lfschat.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- lfschat.xml	3 Jan 2003 02:14:20 -0000	1.2
  +++ lfschat.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.3
  @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <para>The lfs-chat list is the place for community chatter.
   It's a place where anything goes, nothing is off-topic.
   You can discuss the price of beer or what hardware to buy.
  -Even GNU versus BSD and Microsoft versus Linux flamewars
  +Even GNU versus BSD and Microsoft versus Linux flame wars
   are okay in lfs-chat.</para>
   
   </sect2>
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/lfsdev.xml
  
  Index: lfsdev.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/lfsdev.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.2
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  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- lfsdev.xml	3 Jan 2003 02:14:20 -0000	1.2
  +++ lfsdev.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.3
  @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>lfs-dev</title>
   
  -<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS Book development.</para>
  +<para>The lfs-dev list is for discussion of LFS book development.</para>
   
   </sect2>
   
  
  
  
  1.13      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter01/subscribe.xml
  
  Index: subscribe.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter01/subscribe.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.12
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  diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
  --- subscribe.xml	21 Sep 2001 19:46:27 -0000	1.12
  +++ subscribe.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.13
  @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
   <sect2>
   <title>How to subscribe?</title>
   
  -<para>Any of the above-mentioned mailinglists can be subscribed to by sending
  +<para>Any of the above-mentioned mailing lists can be subscribed to by sending
   an email to <ulink url="mailto:listar at linuxfromscratch.org">listar at linuxfromscratch.org</ulink> 
   and writing <emphasis>subscribe listname</emphasis> as the subject 
   header of the message.</para>
  
  
  
  1.48      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter05/fileutils-inst.xml
  
  Index: fileutils-inst.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter05/fileutils-inst.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.47
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  diff -u -r1.47 -r1.48
  --- fileutils-inst.xml	11 Jan 2003 17:41:17 -0000	1.47
  +++ fileutils-inst.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:44 -0000	1.48
  @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
   
   <para><screen><userinput>make</userinput></screen></para>
   
  -<para>And finsh off installing the package:</para>
  +<para>And finish off installing the package:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>
   
  
  
  
  1.10      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml
  
  Index: config-shadowpwd.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/config-shadowpwd.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.9
  retrieving revision 1.10
  diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
  --- config-shadowpwd.xml	6 Oct 2002 15:50:25 -0000	1.9
  +++ config-shadowpwd.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.10
  @@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
   thing to keep in mind if you decide to use shadow support: that 
   programs that need to verify passwords (for example xdm, ftp daemons, 
   pop3 daemons) need to be 'shadow-compliant', that is they need to
  -be able to work with shadow'ed passwords.</para>
  +be able to work with shadowed passwords.</para>
   
  -<para>To enable shadow'ed passwords, run the following command:</para>
  +<para>To enable shadowed passwords, run the following command:</para>
   
   <para><screen><userinput>/usr/sbin/pwconv</userinput></screen></para>
   
  
  
  
  1.14      +2 -2      LFS/BOOK/chapter06/gcc-exp.xml
  
  Index: gcc-exp.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter06/gcc-exp.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.13
  retrieving revision 1.14
  diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
  --- gcc-exp.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:28 -0000	1.13
  +++ gcc-exp.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.14
  @@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
   <title>Command explanations</title>
   
   <para><userinput>--enable-threads=posix:</userinput> This enables C++
  -exception handling for multithreaded code.</para>
  +exception handling for multi-threaded code.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>--enable-__cxa_atexit:</userinput> This option will result
   in C++ shared libraries and C++ programs that are interoperable with other
  -linux distributions.</para>
  +Linux distributions.</para>
   
   <para><userinput>--enable-clocale=gnu:</userinput> There is a risk that
   some people will build ABI incompatible C++ libraries if they didn't install
  
  
  
  1.19      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter07/setclock.xml
  
  Index: setclock.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter07/setclock.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.18
  retrieving revision 1.19
  diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
  --- setclock.xml	11 May 2002 13:26:21 -0000	1.18
  +++ setclock.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.19
  @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   
   <para>Now, you may want to take a look at a very good hint explaining how we
   deal with time on LFS at <ulink url="&hints-root;time.txt"/>. 
  -It explains issues such as timezones, UTC, and the TZ environment
  +It explains issues such as time zones, UTC, and the TZ environment
   variable.</para>
   
   </sect1>
  
  
  
  1.3       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/chapter09/whatnow.xml
  
  Index: whatnow.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/chapter09/whatnow.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.2
  retrieving revision 1.3
  diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
  --- whatnow.xml	26 Oct 2002 04:30:46 -0000	1.2
  +++ whatnow.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.3
  @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   
   <listitem><para>Mailing lists</para>
   
  -<para>There are several LFS mailinglists you may subscribe to if you are
  +<para>There are several LFS mailing lists you may subscribe to if you are
   in need of help. See <xref linkend="ch01-maillists"/> for more
   information.</para></listitem>
   
  
  
  
  1.9       +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/preface/foreword.xml
  
  Index: foreword.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/preface/foreword.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
  --- foreword.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:28 -0000	1.8
  +++ foreword.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.9
  @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
   default. Much more of that sort of thing bothered me. Finally I realized
   that if I wanted full satisfaction from my Linux system I would have to
   build my own system from scratch, using only the source code. I resolved
  -not to use pre-compiled packages of any kind, nor CD-ROM or bootdisk that
  +not to use pre-compiled packages of any kind, nor CD-ROM or boot disk that
   would install some basic utilities. I would use my current Linux system to
   develop my own.</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.16      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/preface/whonotread.xml
  
  Index: whonotread.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/preface/whonotread.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.15
  retrieving revision 1.16
  diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
  --- whonotread.xml	11 Sep 2002 22:22:24 -0000	1.15
  +++ whonotread.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.16
  @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   
   <para>If you do not wish to build your own Linux system from scratch, then
   you probably don't want to read this book. Our goal is to build a complete
  -and useable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while
  +and usable foundation system. If you only want to know what happens while
   your computer boots, then we recommend the
   <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> HOWTO. The HOWTO builds a bare
   system which is similar to that of this book, but it focuses strictly on
  
  
  
  1.21      +1 -1      LFS/BOOK/preface/whoread.xml
  
  Index: whoread.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/BOOK/preface/whoread.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.20
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  diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21
  --- whoread.xml	20 Sep 2002 21:11:28 -0000	1.20
  +++ whoread.xml	13 Jan 2003 13:26:45 -0000	1.21
  @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
   This allows you to review it, to omit unwanted ingredients, and to
   add your own ingredients which enhance the flavor of your burger. When you
   are satisfied with the recipe, you go on to preparing it. You make it just
  -the way you like it: broil it, bake it, deep-fry it, barbeque it, or eat it
  +the way you like it: broil it, bake it, deep-fry it, barbecue it, or eat it
   tar-tar (raw).</para>
   
   <para>Another analogy that we can use is that of comparing LFS with a 
  
  
  
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