cvs commit: LFS/newxml/chapter07 loadkeys.xml

Anderson Lizardo lizardo at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Mar 21 15:23:04 PST 2004


On Dom, 21 Mar 2004 21:54:24 +0000, Matthew Burgess wrote:
> Maybe it would just be better to say something like:
> 
> "If you will be compiling the keymap directly in the kernel during
> chapter 8 (see kbd for details),..."
> 
> Any better/clearer?

I'd suggest:

"If you plan to compile the keymap directly in the kernel during chapter
8 (see kbd for details)..."

Also, I *suspect* you should use "into" instead of "in" in this case:
"...compile the keymap directly into the kernel..."

Not sure though :)
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