cvs commit: LFS/newxml/chapter07 loadkeys.xml

Matthew Burgess matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Mar 21 15:26:27 PST 2004


On Sun, 21 Mar 2004 19:23:04 -0400
Anderson Lizardo <lizardo at linuxfromscratch.org> wrote:

> On Dom, 21 Mar 2004 21:54:24 +0000, Matthew Burgess wrote:
> > Maybe it would just be better to say something like:
> > 
> > "If you will be compiling the keymap directly in the kernel during
> > chapter 8 (see kbd for details),..."
> > 
> > Any better/clearer?
> 
> I'd suggest:
> 
> "If you plan to compile the keymap directly in the kernel during
> chapter 8 (see kbd for details)..."
> 
> Also, I *suspect* you should use "into" instead of "in" in this case:
> "...compile the keymap directly into the kernel..."
> 
> Not sure though :)

Great minds think alike (or we're all fools the same!).  Was just about
to suggest something very similar myself.  Cheers.

Matt.



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