cvs commit: LFS/newxml/chapter07 loadkeys.xml

Alex Potter spambin at apcuk.dyndns.org
Sun Mar 21 15:29:23 PST 2004


On Sun, 21 Mar 2004 23:26:27 +0000, Matthew Burgess thusly spake in
<20040321232627.1eeefda8.matthew at linuxfromscratch.org>:

> On Sun, 21 Mar 2004 19:23:04 -0400
> Anderson Lizardo <lizardo at linuxfromscratch.org> wrote:
> 
>> On Dom, 21 Mar 2004 21:54:24 +0000, Matthew Burgess wrote:
>> > Maybe it would just be better to say something like:
>> > 
>> > "If you will be compiling the keymap directly in the kernel during
>> > chapter 8 (see kbd for details),..."
>> > 
>> > Any better/clearer?
>> 
>> I'd suggest:
>> 
>> "If you plan to compile the keymap directly in the kernel during
>> chapter 8 (see kbd for details)..."
>> 
>> Also, I *suspect* you should use "into" instead of "in" in this case:
>> "...compile the keymap directly into the kernel..."
>> 
>> Not sure though :)
> 
> Great minds think alike (or we're all fools the same!).  Was just about
> to suggest something very similar myself.  Cheers.
> 
> Matt.

I like that too :))
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