cvs commit: LFS/newxml/chapter08 chapter08.xml

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon Mar 22 12:48:28 PST 2004


matthew     04/03/22 13:48:28

  Modified:    newxml/chapter01 how.xml
               newxml/chapter06 gcc-2953.xml kbd.xml
               newxml/chapter07 introduction.xml loadkeys.xml
               newxml/chapter08 chapter08.xml
  Log:
  * Improved grammatical correctness of the loadkeys introduction (no really, I
    did this time) - Thanks Anderson & Alex!
  * Renamed the chapter ID for chapter 8 to match that of it's section IDs
    and updated the links that pointed to it.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.4       +1 -1      LFS/newxml/chapter01/how.xml
  
  Index: how.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/newxml/chapter01/how.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- how.xml	9 Mar 2004 21:57:50 -0000	1.3
  +++ how.xml	22 Mar 2004 20:48:27 -0000	1.4
  @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
   
   <para>To finish the installation, the bootscripts are set up in
   <xref linkend="chapter-bootscripts"/>, the kernel and bootloader are set up in
  -<xref linkend="chapter-mixture"/>, and <xref linkend="chapter-finalizing"/> contains some
  +<xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>, and <xref linkend="chapter-finalizing"/> contains some
   pointers to help you after you finish the book. Then, finally, you're ready to
   reboot your computer into your new LFS system.</para>
   
  
  
  
  1.5       +6 -6      LFS/newxml/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml
  
  Index: gcc-2953.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/newxml/chapter06/gcc-2953.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
  retrieving revision 1.5
  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- gcc-2953.xml	9 Mar 2004 21:57:51 -0000	1.4
  +++ gcc-2953.xml	22 Mar 2004 20:48:27 -0000	1.5
  @@ -32,12 +32,12 @@
   or modifying them when building GCC.</para>
   
   <para>This is an older release of GCC which we are going to install for the
  -purpose of compiling the Linux kernel in <xref linkend="chapter-mixture"/>. This
  -version is recommended
  -by the kernel developers when you need absolute stability. Later versions of
  -GCC have not received as much testing for Linux kernel compilation. Using a
  -later version is likely to work, however, we recommend adhering to the kernel
  -developer's advice and using the version here to compile your kernel.</para>
  +purpose of compiling the Linux kernel in <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>.
  +This version is recommended by the kernel developers when you need absolute
  +stability. Later versions of GCC have not received as much testing for Linux
  +kernel compilation. Using a later version is likely to work, however, we
  +recommend adhering to the kernel developer's advice and using the version here
  +to compile your kernel.</para>
   
   <note><para>We don't install the C++ compiler or libraries here. However, there
   may be reasons why you would want to install them. More information can be found
  
  
  
  1.5       +1 -1      LFS/newxml/chapter06/kbd.xml
  
  Index: kbd.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/newxml/chapter06/kbd.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
  retrieving revision 1.5
  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- kbd.xml	9 Mar 2004 21:57:52 -0000	1.4
  +++ kbd.xml	22 Mar 2004 20:48:27 -0000	1.5
  @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
   even when you boot into maintenance mode (by passing `init=/bin/sh' to the
   kernel), as then the bootscript that normally sets up your keymap isn't run.</para>
   
  -<para>When in <xref linkend="chapter-mixture"/> you're ready to compile the
  +<para>When in <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/> you're ready to compile the
   kernel, run the following command to patch the current default keymap into the
   source (you will have to repeat this command whenever you unpack a new
   kernel):</para>
  
  
  
  1.4       +1 -1      LFS/newxml/chapter07/introduction.xml
  
  Index: introduction.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/newxml/chapter07/introduction.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.3
  retrieving revision 1.4
  diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
  --- introduction.xml	9 Mar 2004 21:57:53 -0000	1.3
  +++ introduction.xml	22 Mar 2004 20:48:27 -0000	1.4
  @@ -19,6 +19,6 @@
   something more radical, search the LFS mailing lists for "depinit".</para>
   
   <para>If you decide to use some other style of init scripts, you can skip this
  -chapter and move on to <xref linkend="chapter-mixture"/>.</para>
  +chapter and move on to <xref linkend="chapter-bootable"/>.</para>
   
   </sect1>
  
  
  
  1.5       +7 -7      LFS/newxml/chapter07/loadkeys.xml
  
  Index: loadkeys.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/newxml/chapter07/loadkeys.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
  retrieving revision 1.5
  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- loadkeys.xml	21 Mar 2004 20:45:14 -0000	1.4
  +++ loadkeys.xml	22 Mar 2004 20:48:27 -0000	1.5
  @@ -7,13 +7,13 @@
   <title>Do I need the loadkeys script?</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="loadkeys.html"?>
   
  -<para>If, when installing <xref linkend="ch-system-kbd"/>, you decided that you
  -will be compiling your keymap directly into the kernel during <xref
  -linkend="chapter-mixture"/>, then strictly speaking you don't need to run this
  -loadkeys script, since the kernel will set up the keymap for you. If you wish,
  -you can still run the script, it isn't going to hurt you. Keeping it could even
  -be beneficial, in case you run a lot of different kernels and can't be sure
  -that the keymap is compiled into every one of them.</para>
  +<para>If you plan to compile the keymap directly in the kernel during <xref
  +linkend="chapter-bootable"/> (see <xref linkend="ch-system-kbd"/>, then strictly
  +speaking you don't need to run this loadkeys script, since the kernel will set
  +up the keymap for you. If you wish, you can still run the script, it isn't going
  +to hurt you. Keeping it could even be beneficial, in case you run a lot of
  +different kernels and can't be sure that the keymap is compiled into every one
  +of them.</para>
   
   <para>If you decided you don't need or don't want to use the loadkeys script,
   remove the <filename class="symlink">/etc/rc.d/rcsysinit.d/S70loadkeys</filename> symlink.</para>
  
  
  
  1.7       +1 -1      LFS/newxml/chapter08/chapter08.xml
  
  Index: chapter08.xml
  ===================================================================
  RCS file: /home/cvsroot/LFS/newxml/chapter08/chapter08.xml,v
  retrieving revision 1.6
  retrieving revision 1.7
  diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
  --- chapter08.xml	9 Mar 2004 21:57:53 -0000	1.6
  +++ chapter08.xml	22 Mar 2004 20:48:27 -0000	1.7
  @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
     <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
     %general-entities;
   ]>
  -<chapter xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" id="chapter-mixture" xreflabel="Chapter 8">
  +<chapter xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude" id="chapter-bootable" xreflabel="Chapter 8">
   <?dbhtml dir="chapter08"?>
   <title>Making the LFS system bootable</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="chapter08.html"?>
  
  
  



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