r4112 - in branches/testing/BOOK: . chapter06 chapter07 chapter08

gerard at linuxfromscratch.org gerard at linuxfromscratch.org
Fri Sep 3 14:36:41 PDT 2004


Author: gerard
Date: 2004-09-03 15:36:40 -0600 (Fri, 03 Sep 2004)
New Revision: 4112

Modified:
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/bash.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter07/hosts.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/fstab.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/general.ent
Log:
Minor textual edits

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/bash.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/bash.xml	2004-09-03 18:39:05 UTC (rev 4111)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/bash.xml	2004-09-03 21:36:40 UTC (rev 4112)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 installed as suggested.  This patch fixes a problem where Bash
 sometimes limits 33 characters to a line before wrapping to the next
 line. If Readline has been installed per the instructions, this patch
-is not necessary because the patch applied to the Readine package
+is not necessary because the patch applied to the Readline package
 already resolves this issue.</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../bash-&bash-version;-display_wrap-1.patch</userinput></screen>

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter07/hosts.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter07/hosts.xml	2004-09-03 18:39:05 UTC (rev 4111)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter07/hosts.xml	2004-09-03 21:36:40 UTC (rev 4112)
@@ -42,21 +42,9 @@
 <para>Even if not using a network card, an FQDN is still required.
 This is necessary for certain programs to operate correctly.</para>
 
-<para>If a network card is not going to be configured, create the
-<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file by running:</para>
+<para>Create the  <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file by running:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cat > /etc/hosts << "EOF"
-<literal># Begin /etc/hosts (no network card version)
-
-127.0.0.1 <replaceable>[<HOSTNAME>.example.org]</replaceable> <replaceable>[HOSTNAME]</replaceable> localhost
-
-# End /etc/hosts (no network card version)</literal>
-EOF</userinput></screen>
-
-<para>If a network card is to be configured, create the 
-<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file by running:</para>
-
-<screen><userinput>cat > /etc/hosts << "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/hosts (network card version)
 
 127.0.0.1 localhost
@@ -71,5 +59,16 @@
 assigned an IP address by a network/system administrator and the
 machine will be connected to an existing network).</para>
 
+<para>If a network card is not going to be configured, create the
+<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file by running:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>cat > /etc/hosts << "EOF"
+<literal># Begin /etc/hosts (no network card version)
+
+127.0.0.1 <replaceable>[<HOSTNAME>.example.org]</replaceable> <replaceable>[HOSTNAME]</replaceable> localhost
+
+# End /etc/hosts (no network card version)</literal>
+EOF</userinput></screen>
+
 </sect1>
 

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/fstab.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/fstab.xml	2004-09-03 18:39:05 UTC (rev 4111)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/fstab.xml	2004-09-03 21:36:40 UTC (rev 4112)
@@ -33,13 +33,13 @@
 with the values appropriate for the system, for example, <filename
 class="partition">hda2</filename>, <filename
 class="partition">hda5</filename>, and <systemitem
-class="filesystem">reiserfs</systemitem>. For details on the six
+class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>. For details on the six
 fields in this file, see <command>man 5 fstab</command>.</para>
 
-<para>When using a reiserfs partition, the <parameter>1 1</parameter>
-at the end of the line should be replaced with <parameter>0
-0</parameter> because such a partition does not need to be dumped or
-checked.</para>
+<para>When using a journalling file system, the <parameter>1
+1</parameter> at the end of the line should be replaced with
+<parameter>0 0</parameter> because such a partition does not need to
+be dumped or checked.</para>
 
 <para>The <filename class="directory">/dev/shm</filename> mount point
 for <systemitem class="filesystem">tmpfs</systemitem> is included to

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml	2004-09-03 18:39:05 UTC (rev 4111)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter08/kernel.xml	2004-09-03 21:36:40 UTC (rev 4112)
@@ -49,11 +49,11 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's@/sbin/hotplug@/bin/true@' kernel/kmod.c</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>If, in <xref linkend="ch-scripts-console"/> the keymap was
-compiled into the kernel, issue the command below:</para>
+<para>If, in <xref linkend="ch-scripts-console"/> it was decided to
+compile the keymap into the kernel, issue the command below:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>loadkeys -m /usr/share/kbd/keymaps/<replaceable>[path to  keymap]</replaceable> > \
-    <replaceable>[sources dir]</replaceable>/linux-&linux-version;/drivers/char/defkeymap.c</userinput></screen>
+    /linux-&linux-version;/drivers/char/defkeymap.c</userinput></screen>
 
 <para>For example, if using a Dutch keyboard, use
 <filename>/usr/share/kbd/keymaps/i386/qwerty/nl.map.gz</filename>.</para>

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/general.ent	2004-09-03 18:39:05 UTC (rev 4111)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/general.ent	2004-09-03 21:36:40 UTC (rev 4112)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "6.0-testing-20040901">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "September 01, 2004">
+<!ENTITY version "6.0-testing-20040903">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "September 03, 2004">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">
 <!ENTITY blfs-root "&lfs-root;blfs/">




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