r4211 - branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06

manuel at linuxfromscratch.org manuel at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Sep 25 12:57:46 PDT 2004


Author: manuel
Date: 2004-09-25 13:57:44 -0600 (Sat, 25 Sep 2004)
New Revision: 4211

Modified:
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iana-etc.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iproute2.xml
Log:
Tags & typos corrections.

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml	2004-09-25 15:14:02 UTC (rev 4210)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml	2004-09-25 19:57:44 UTC (rev 4211)
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 <parameter>-mcpu</parameter> options) are changed. If any environment
 variables that override default optimizations have been defined, such
 as <envar>CFLAGS</envar> and <envar>CXXFLAGS</envar>,
-unset them when building GCC.</para>
+unset them when building Glibc.</para>
 
 <para>The Glibc build system is self-contained and will install
 perfectly, even though the compiler specs file and linker are still
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@
 <screen><userinput>cp --remove-destination /usr/share/zoneinfo/<replaceable>[xxx]</replaceable> \
     /etc/localtime</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Replace [xxx] with the name of the time zone that the
+<para>Replace <replaceable>[xxx]</replaceable> with the name of the time zone that the
 <command>tzselect</command> provided (e.g., Canada/Eastern).</para>
 
 <para>The meaning of the cp option:</para>

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iana-etc.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iana-etc.xml	2004-09-25 15:14:02 UTC (rev 4210)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iana-etc.xml	2004-09-25 19:57:44 UTC (rev 4211)
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 
 <segmentedlist>
 <segtitle>Installed files</segtitle>
-<seglistitem><seg>protocols and services</seg></seglistitem>
+<seglistitem><seg>/etc/protocols and /etc/services</seg></seglistitem>
 </segmentedlist>
 
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-iana-etc"><primary sortas="e-/etc/protocols">/etc/protocols</primary></indexterm>

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iproute2.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iproute2.xml	2004-09-25 15:14:02 UTC (rev 4210)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/iproute2.xml	2004-09-25 19:57:44 UTC (rev 4211)
@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@
   <title>Iproute2-&iproute2-version;</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="iproute2.html"?>
   <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2">
-    <primary sortas="a-iproute2">iproute2</primary>
+    <primary sortas="a-iproute2">Iproute2</primary>
   </indexterm>
   <sect2 role="package">
     <title/>
-    <para>The iproute2 package contains programs for basic and advanced
+    <para>The Iproute2 package contains programs for basic and advanced
           IPV4-based networking.
     </para>
     <segmentedlist>
@@ -36,13 +36,13 @@
           common requirement on a base Linux system, remove the dependency on
           Berkeley DB by applying the patch using the command below.  If 
           the <command>arpd</command> binary is needed, instructions for
-          compiling Berkeley DB can be found in the BLFS Book at<ulink
+          compiling Berkeley DB can be found in the BLFS Book at <ulink
           url="&blfs-root;view/svn/content/databases.html#db"/>.
     </para>
 
     <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../iproute2-&iproute2-patch-version;-remove_db-1.patch</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Prepare iproute2 for compilation:</para>
+    <para>Prepare Iproute2 for compilation:</para>
     <screen><userinput>./configure </userinput></screen>
 
     <para>Compile the package:</para>
@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@
     <variablelist>
     <varlistentry>
     <term><parameter>SBINDIR=/sbin</parameter></term>
-    <listitem><para>This makes sure that the iproute2 binaries will install into
+    <listitem><para>This makes sure that the Iproute2 binaries will install into
       <filename class="directory">/sbin</filename>.  This is the correct
-      location according to the FHS, because some of the iproute2 binaries are used
+      location according to the FHS, because some of the Iproute2 binaries are used
       in the bootscripts.</para>
     </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
                 table and change routing table rules.
           </para>
 
-          <para><command>ip tunnel</command> allows user to look at the ip
+          <para><command>ip tunnel</command> allows user to look at the IP
                 tunnels and their properties, and change them.
           </para>
 
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
           <command>routef</command>
         </term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>a component of ip route. This is for flushing the routing
+          <para>a component of <command>ip route</command>. This is for flushing the routing
                 tables.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 routef">
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
           <command>routel</command>
         </term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>a component of ip route. This is for listing the routing
+          <para>a component of <command>ip route</command>. This is for listing the routing
                 tables.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 routel">
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
           <command>ss</command>
         </term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>similar to the netstat command. Shows active connections.</para>
+          <para>similar to the <command>netstat</command> command. Shows active connections.</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ss">
             <primary sortas="b-ss">ss</primary>
           </indexterm>




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