r4251 - branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06

manuel at linuxfromscratch.org manuel at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed Sep 29 13:06:13 PDT 2004


Author: manuel
Date: 2004-09-29 14:06:11 -0600 (Wed, 29 Sep 2004)
New Revision: 4251

Modified:
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
   branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/sysvinit.xml
Log:
Tags & typo corrections.

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml	2004-09-29 18:40:23 UTC (rev 4250)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/strippingagain.xml	2004-09-29 20:06:11 UTC (rev 4251)
@@ -1,5 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd">
+<!DOCTYPE sect1 PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.3//EN" "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd" [
+  <!ENTITY % general-entities SYSTEM "../general.ent">
+  %general-entities;
+]>
 <sect1 id="ch-system-strippingagain">
 <title>Stripping Again</title>
 <?dbhtml filename="strippingagain.html"?>
@@ -12,9 +15,9 @@
 
 <para>Most people who use the command mentioned below do not
 experience any difficulties. However, it is easy to make a typo and
-render the new system unusable, so before running the strip command,
-it is a good idea to make a backup of the current
-situation.</para>
+render the new system unusable, so before running the 
+<command>strip</command> command, it is a good idea to make a
+backup of the current situation.</para>
 
 <para>Before performing the stripping, take special care to ensure that
 none of the binaries that are about to be stripped are running. If
@@ -42,7 +45,7 @@
 binaries.</para>
 
 <para>If disk space is very tight, the
-<parameter>--strip-all</parameter> options can be used on the binaries
+<parameter>--strip-all</parameter> option can be used on the binaries
 in <filename class="directory">/{,usr/}{bin,sbin}</filename> to gain
 several more megabytes. Do not use this option on libraries—they will
 be destroyed.</para>

Modified: branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/sysvinit.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/sysvinit.xml	2004-09-29 18:40:23 UTC (rev 4250)
+++ branches/testing/BOOK/chapter06/sysvinit.xml	2004-09-29 20:06:11 UTC (rev 4251)
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@
 <command>agetty</command> to send this escape sequence to the terminal
 before doing anything else. This escape sequence switches the console
 character set to a user-defined one, which can be modified by running
-the <command>setfont</command> program. The console initscript from
-the LFS-Bootscripts package calls the <command>setfont</command>
+the <command>setfont</command> program. The <command>console</command>
+initscript from the LFS-Bootscripts package calls the <command>setfont</command>
 program during system startup. Sending this escape sequence is
 necessary for people who use non-ISO 8859-1 screen fonts, but it does
 not effect native English speakers.</para>
@@ -141,8 +141,8 @@
 <term><command>init</command></term>
 <listitem>
 <para>the first process to be started when the kernel has initialized
-the hardware. Init takes over the boot process and starts all the
-proceses it is instructed to.</para>
+the hardware. <command>init</command> takes over the boot process and 
+starts all the proceses it is instructed to.</para>
 <indexterm zone="ch-system-sysvinit init"><primary sortas="b-init">init</primary></indexterm>
 </listitem>
 </varlistentry>




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