r6615 - trunk/BOOK/chapter06

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat Aug 6 04:21:57 PDT 2005


Author: matthew
Date: 2005-08-06 05:21:55 -0600 (Sat, 06 Aug 2005)
New Revision: 6615

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml
Log:
Fix a couple of minor grammar issues (Chris Staub)

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml	2005-08-06 11:19:23 UTC (rev 6614)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml	2005-08-06 11:21:55 UTC (rev 6615)
@@ -35,8 +35,7 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --libdir=/lib --enable-shared</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Remove the installation of the <command>groups</command> program, and its man page as
-Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
+<para>Remove the installation of the <command>groups</command> program and its man page, as Coreutils provides a better version:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's/groups$(EXEEXT) //' src/Makefile
 sed -i '/groups/d' man/Makefile</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml	2005-08-06 11:19:23 UTC (rev 6614)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/vim.xml	2005-08-06 11:21:55 UTC (rev 6615)
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 <para>First, unpack both
 <filename>vim-&vim-version;.tar.bz2</filename> and (optionally)
 <filename>vim-&vim-version;-lang.tar.gz</filename> archives into the
-same directory. Then, change the default locations of the
+same directory. Then, change the default location of the
 <filename>vimrc</filename> configuration file to <filename
 class="directory">/etc</filename>:</para>
 




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