r5205 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 prologue

jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat May 7 10:04:57 PDT 2005


Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2005-05-07 11:04:57 -0600 (Sat, 07 May 2005)
New Revision: 5205

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml
Log:
Edited text in preface

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-07 17:01:27 UTC (rev 5204)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-07 17:04:57 UTC (rev 5205)
@@ -32,6 +32,8 @@
    <listitem><para>May 7, 2005 [jhuntwork]</para>
     <itemizedlist>
      <listitem><para>Upgraded to DocBook 4.4.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Added a changelog, stylesheets and a Makefile.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Updated text in the preface, swapped CVS for SVN.</para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
    </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml	2005-05-07 17:01:27 UTC (rev 5204)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml	2005-05-07 17:04:57 UTC (rev 5205)
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 
 <para>This manual will teach you all that you need to know in order to
 properly edit the LFS-Book. It will cover some basic issues like accessing
-CVS over SSH and the CVS commands you will be used. It will also discuss
+SVN over SSH and the SVN commands you will use. It will also discuss
 the proper sequence of doing things like upgrading a package (both in the
 book as well as the FTP server) and how to work with the bug tracking
 database.</para>




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