r5206 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 prologue

jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat May 7 10:10:54 PDT 2005


Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2005-05-07 11:10:54 -0600 (Sat, 07 May 2005)
New Revision: 5206

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/introduction.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml
Log:
Opted for Subversion instead of SVN, and changed text in chapter01/introduction.

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-07 17:04:57 UTC (rev 5205)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-07 17:10:54 UTC (rev 5206)
@@ -33,7 +33,8 @@
     <itemizedlist>
      <listitem><para>Upgraded to DocBook 4.4.</para></listitem>
      <listitem><para>Added a changelog, stylesheets and a Makefile.</para></listitem>
-     <listitem><para>Updated text in the preface, swapped CVS for SVN.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Updated text in the preface, swapped CVS for Subversion.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Updated text in Chapter01/introduction.</para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
    </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/introduction.xml	2005-05-07 17:04:57 UTC (rev 5205)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/introduction.xml	2005-05-07 17:10:54 UTC (rev 5206)
@@ -12,12 +12,12 @@
 the mailing lists <userinput>lfs-book</userinput>,
 <userinput>lfs-dev</userinput> and (to a lesser extent) 
 <userinput>lfs-support</userinput>. Secondly the Bugzilla tracking
-system, and thirdly the CVS server where the book itself is
+system, and thirdly the Subversion server where the book itself is
 stored. All of these services are provided by the server
 <userinput>linuxfromscratch.org</userinput> also known as
 <userinput>belgarath.linuxfromscratch.org</userinput> or more usually,
 <userinput>belgarath</userinput>. This single server provides mailing
-lists, web hosting, CVS hosting, ftp hosting, the Bugzilla system and
+lists, web hosting, Subversion hosting, the Bugzilla system and
 basically everything we use to work on the LFS project.</para>
 
 <para>The actual LFS book itself is written using Docbook-XML and at
@@ -28,7 +28,8 @@
 <filename>book/book.xml</filename>. Continue in this way and you'll find
 your way around the book soon enough.</para>
 
-<para>The Bugzilla bug-tracking system for LFS can be found at <ulink url="http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org"/>. In order to be able to
+<para>The Bugzilla bug-tracking system for LFS can be found at
+<ulink url="http://bugs.linuxfromscratch.org"/>. In order to be able to
 add, remove and edit bugs, you need to add an account and make sure you
 are logged in whenever you wish to perform such an action.  You can
 query and read the bug database without logging in or creating a user.
@@ -37,7 +38,7 @@
 should be subscribed to this and the <userinput>lfs-dev</userinput>
 list at a minimum.</para>
 
-<para>Finally, there is the CVS server which will be discussed in the
+<para>Finally, there is the Subversion server which will be discussed in the
 following chapters.</para>
 
 </sect1>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml	2005-05-07 17:04:57 UTC (rev 5205)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/prologue/preface.xml	2005-05-07 17:10:54 UTC (rev 5206)
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 
 <para>This manual will teach you all that you need to know in order to
 properly edit the LFS-Book. It will cover some basic issues like accessing
-SVN over SSH and the SVN commands you will use. It will also discuss
+Subversion over SSH and the Subversion commands you will use. It will also discuss
 the proper sequence of doing things like upgrading a package (both in the
 book as well as the FTP server) and how to work with the bug tracking
 database.</para>




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