r5215 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter02 chapter03

jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat May 7 11:14:29 PDT 2005

Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2005-05-07 12:14:29 -0600 (Sat, 07 May 2005)
New Revision: 5215

Tweaks to commands in chapter 2 and edits to chapter 3 checkout

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml	2005-05-07 18:03:08 UTC (rev 5214)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml	2005-05-07 18:14:29 UTC (rev 5215)
@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@
 <para>To get anonymous access, simply use the following commands (note
 that these assume you are using bash or a similar shell:</para>
-<screen><userinput>svn co svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK lfs-trunk</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>svn checkout svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK lfs-trunk</userinput></screen>
 <para>This will "check out" the current revision of the LFS book into
 a directory named "lfs-trunk".  When you wish to update your local copy (often called a
 working copy), simply cd into the directory and run:</para>
-<screen><userinput>svn up</userinput></screen>
+<screen><userinput>svn update</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml	2005-05-07 18:03:08 UTC (rev 5214)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/svnssh.xml	2005-05-07 18:14:29 UTC (rev 5215)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 <para>Once you have this setup, try to checkout the latest LFS book revision by
-<screen><userinput>svn co svn+ssh://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK lfs-trunk
+<screen><userinput>svn checkout svn+ssh://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK lfs-trunk
 <para>If this works, you'll pull the current book into lfs-trunk and you
@@ -43,6 +43,6 @@
 <para>As with anonymous access, you can update your local copy by simply
 cd'ing into the LFS directory and running:</para>
-<para><screen><userinput>svn up</userinput></screen></para>
+<para><screen><userinput>svn update</userinput></screen></para>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml	2005-05-07 18:03:08 UTC (rev 5214)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml	2005-05-07 18:14:29 UTC (rev 5215)
@@ -5,15 +5,15 @@
 <sect1 id="ch03-checkout">
-  <title>cvs checkout/co</title>
+  <title>svn checkout/co</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="checkout.html"?>
-  <para><userinput>cvs checkout</userinput> or <userinput>cvs co</userinput>.
-    This command is used to pull a CVS tree such as
+  <para><userinput>svn checkout</userinput> or <userinput>svn co</userinput>.
+    This command is used to pull a Subversion directory such as
     <filename>LFS/BOOK</filename> (the LFS book) or <filename>BLFS</filename>
     (the BLFS book) from the server.  You should only need to do this once. If
     we mess around with the directory structure (as sometimes is necessary),
-    you may occasionally need to delete your local sandbox and re-check it out.
+    you may occasionally need to delete your local working copy and re-check it out.
     If this is going to be needed, it will usually be because the Editor will
     have made a <emphasis>large</emphasis> change and it'll be announced at
     least on the <filename>lfs-book</filename> list.

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml	2005-05-07 18:03:08 UTC (rev 5214)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml	2005-05-07 18:14:29 UTC (rev 5215)
@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@
 <sect1 id="ch03-introduction">
-  <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
+ <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
   <para>Let's get familiar with the basic
     set of commands which all editors will use on an almost daily basis. There
     are many more options available than the ones listed here, so you will want
     to read the Subversion documentation at some point located at
-    <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/">, and run the <userinput>svn
+    <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/"/>, and run the <userinput>svn
     help</userinput> command.

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