r5223 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter04

jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Sat May 7 17:14:06 PDT 2005


Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2005-05-07 18:14:06 -0600 (Sat, 07 May 2005)
New Revision: 5223

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter04/introduction.xml
Log:
Edits in Chapter 4 introduction

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 00:05:19 UTC (rev 5222)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 00:14:06 UTC (rev 5223)
@@ -36,7 +36,8 @@
      <listitem><para>Updated text in the preface, swapped CVS for Subversion.</para></listitem>
      <listitem><para>Updated text in Chapter01/introduction.</para></listitem>
      <listitem><para>Updated text in Chapter02.</para></listitem>
-     <listitem><para>Updated text in Chapter03/introduction.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Updated text in Chapter03.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Updated text in Chapter04.</para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
    </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter04/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter04/introduction.xml	2005-05-08 00:05:19 UTC (rev 5222)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter04/introduction.xml	2005-05-08 00:14:06 UTC (rev 5223)
@@ -11,18 +11,17 @@
   <para>Here is a summary list of things to do before committing changes:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
-    <listitem><para>Test the instructions you are adding</para></listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Update <filename>index.xml</filename> with the new date and
-      / or updated entities if necessary.</para>
+    <listitem><para>Test the instructions you are adding.</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Update <filename>general.ent</filename> with the new date.</para>
     </listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Update <filename>chapter01/changelog.xml</filename></para>
+    <listitem><para>Update <filename>chapter01/changelog.xml.</filename></para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem><para>Check that all relevant files have been
-      <userinput>cvs add</userinput>'d or <userinput>remove</userinput>'d.
+      <userinput>svn add</userinput>'d or <userinput>remove</userinput>'d.
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem><para>Check that the book renders properly.</para></listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Commit it</para></listitem>
-    <listitem><para>Update bugzilla to reflect the changes</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Commit it.</para></listitem>
+    <listitem><para>Update bugzilla to reflect the changes.</para></listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 </sect1>




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