r5229 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter05

jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 8 08:18:38 PDT 2005


Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2005-05-08 09:18:37 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5229

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml
Log:
Minor edits to chapter 05 enternewbugs.xml

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 15:12:09 UTC (rev 5228)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 15:18:37 UTC (rev 5229)
@@ -34,6 +34,7 @@
      <listitem><para>Removed unnecessary comments about CVS in chapter 3 moving, thanks Randy McMurchy</para></listitem>
      <listitem><para>Swapped revision order in chapter 3 diff, thanks Matthew Burgess</para></listitem>
      <listitem><para>More text updates in Chapter04.</para></listitem>
+     <listitem><para>Text updates in Chapter05.</para></listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
    </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml	2005-05-08 15:12:09 UTC (rev 5228)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml	2005-05-08 15:18:37 UTC (rev 5229)
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@
   </listitem>
 
   <listitem><para>Select the proper <emphasis>Version</emphasis>. You most
-    always will choose the <emphasis>CVS</emphasis> version. It doesn't make
-    sense to report a bug against an old version if it's no longer in CVS. If it
-    is, then CVS is newer than a previously released stable book version.  The
+    always will choose the <emphasis>SVN</emphasis> version. It doesn't make
+    sense to report a bug against an old version if it's no longer in Subversion. If it
+    is, then SVN is newer than a previously released stable book version.  The
     versions are basically there only for people who don't edit the book and who
     want to report a bug against the book version they have.</para>
   </listitem>




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