r5234 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter02

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 8 09:07:33 PDT 2005


Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 10:07:33 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5234

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml
Log:
Improve docbook markup

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 16:00:27 UTC (rev 5233)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 16:07:33 UTC (rev 5234)
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
  <listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
+   <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/anonsvn.xml: Improve docbook markup</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: We use viewcvs for online repository browsing, not cvsweb</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: Fix validation error in chapter04/checkfiles.xml</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: Reworded explanation of book XML structure - we use XIncludes now, not entities.</para></listitem>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml	2005-05-08 16:00:27 UTC (rev 5233)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter02/anonsvn.xml	2005-05-08 16:07:33 UTC (rev 5234)
@@ -13,9 +13,10 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>svn checkout svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK lfs-trunk</userinput></screen>
 
-<para>This will "check out" the current revision of the LFS book into
-a directory named "lfs-trunk".  When you wish to update your local copy (often called a
-working copy), simply cd into the directory and run:</para>
+<para>This will <quote>check out</quote> the current revision of the LFS book
+into a directory named <filename class="directory">lfs-trunk</filename>.  When
+you wish to update your local copy (often called a working copy), simply
+<command>cd</command> into the directory and run:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>svn update</userinput></screen>
 




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