r5236 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter03

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 8 09:25:04 PDT 2005


Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 10:25:03 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5236

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml
Log:
Minor wording and tagging improvements

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 16:14:11 UTC (rev 5235)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev 5236)
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
  <listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
+   <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter03/introduction.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/svnssh.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/anonsvn.xml: Improve docbook markup</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: We use viewcvs for online repository browsing, not cvsweb</para></listitem>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml	2005-05-08 16:14:11 UTC (rev 5235)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/introduction.xml	2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev 5236)
@@ -8,15 +8,17 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
  <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html"?>
 
-  <para>Let's get familiar with the basic
-    set of commands which all editors will use on an almost daily basis. There
-    are many more options available than the ones listed here, so you will want
-    to read the Subversion documentation at some point located at
-    <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/"/>, and run the <userinput>svn
-    help</userinput> command.
+  <para>Let's get familiar with the basic set of commands which all editors will
+    use on an almost daily basis. There are many more options available than the
+    ones listed here, so you will want to read the Subversion documentation
+    (<ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/"/>) at some point.
+    <command>svn <option>help</option></command> also provides a useful quick
+    reference for Subversion commands.
   </para>
 
-  <para>Some commands have two forms, the long and the short. We'll list both in
-    the descriptions.
+  <para>Some Subversion commands have multiple forms, the canonical command and
+    one or more aliases.  We'll list the canonical form and an alias in the
+    descriptions.  <command>svn <option>help</option></command> provides a list
+    of all Subversion commands with all of their aliases.
   </para>
 </sect1>




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