r5237 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter03

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 8 09:30:52 PDT 2005


Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 10:30:52 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5237

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml
Log:
Minor wording and tagging improvements

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev 5236)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 16:30:52 UTC (rev 5237)
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
  <listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
+   <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter03/checkout.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter03/introduction.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/svnssh.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matt]: chapter02/anonsvn.xml: Improve docbook markup</para></listitem>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml	2005-05-08 16:25:03 UTC (rev 5236)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/checkout.xml	2005-05-08 16:30:52 UTC (rev 5237)
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@
     This command is used to pull a Subversion directory such as
     <filename>LFS/BOOK</filename> (the LFS book) or <filename>BLFS</filename>
     (the BLFS book) from the server.  You should only need to do this once. If
-    we mess around with the directory structure (as sometimes is necessary),
-    you may occasionally need to delete your local working copy and re-check it out.
-    If this is going to be needed, it will usually be because the Editor will
-    have made a <emphasis>large</emphasis> change and it'll be announced at
+    we rearrange the directory structure (as is sometimes necessary), you may
+    need to delete your local working copy and re-check it out.
+    If this is going to be needed, it will usually be because an editor will
+    have made a <emphasis>large</emphasis> change and it will be announced at
     least on the <filename>lfs-book</filename> list.
   </para>
 </sect1>




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