r5244 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter03

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun May 8 10:52:21 PDT 2005

Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-08 11:52:20 -0600 (Sun, 08 May 2005)
New Revision: 5244

Minor wording improvements

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 17:50:57 UTC (rev 5243)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-08 17:52:20 UTC (rev 5244)
@@ -31,6 +31,7 @@
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matthew]</para>
+       <listitem><para>chapter03/diff.xml: Minor wording improvements</para></listitem>
        <listitem><para>chapter03/commit.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements.  Also add explanation of <option>-F</option> option to <command>svn <option>commit</option></command></para></listitem>
        <listitem><para>Re-arranged most recent Changelog entries</para></listitem>
        <listitem><para>chapter03/update.xml: Minor wording and tagging improvements</para></listitem>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/diff.xml
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/diff.xml	2005-05-08 17:50:57 UTC (rev 5243)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter03/diff.xml	2005-05-08 17:52:20 UTC (rev 5244)
@@ -17,8 +17,8 @@
     simply edit the files in your local working copy then run
     <userinput>svn diff > FILE.patch</userinput> from the root of your LFS
     directory. You can then attach this file to a message to the
-    <userinput>lfs-dev</userinput> list where someone with editing rights will
-    pick it up and apply it to the book.
+    <userinput>lfs-dev</userinput> list where editors can review the patch and
+    apply it to the book.
   <para>The second use is to find out what has changed between two revisions of
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
     100 of <filename>index.xml</filename>.
-  <para>A third use is to use it to recursively request all the changes between your working
+  <para>A third use is to recursively request all the changes between your working
     copy and the copy on the Subversion server. This is handy to do before running
     <userinput>svn update</userinput> to see what exactly has changed since the
     last time you ran the update command.

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