r5277 - in trunk/editor-manual: chapter01 chapter05

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon May 9 12:31:58 PDT 2005


Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-09 13:31:58 -0600 (Mon, 09 May 2005)
New Revision: 5277

Modified:
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml
   trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/fixbug.xml
Log:
Minor wording improvements in chapter 5

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-09 19:16:57 UTC (rev 5276)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC (rev 5277)
@@ -27,8 +27,12 @@
  </listitem>
 
  <listitem><para>Changelog Entries:</para>
-
   <itemizedlist>
+   <listitem><para>May 9, 2005 [matthew]</para>
+     <itemizedlist>
+       <listitem><para>chapter05/fixbug.xml and chapter05/enternewbugs.xml: Minor wording improvements</para></listitem>
+	 </itemizedlist>
+   </listitem>
    <listitem><para>May 8, 2005 [matthew]</para>
      <itemizedlist>
        <listitem><para>chapter04/checkfiles.xml: Minor tagging improvements</para></listitem>

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml	2005-05-09 19:16:57 UTC (rev 5276)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/enternewbugs.xml	2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC (rev 5277)
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
   <listitem><para>Select the <emphasis>Resolution Priority</emphasis>. Use your
     own judgement on how important fixing this bug is. If you're not sure just
     leave the default. Priorities are periodically re-evaluated and changed
-    anyways (what may be P5 a month ago may be changed to a P1 now because it's
+    anyway (what may be P5 a month ago may be changed to a P1 now because it's
     finally time to fix it).</para>
   </listitem>
 

Modified: trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/fixbug.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/fixbug.xml	2005-05-09 19:16:57 UTC (rev 5276)
+++ trunk/editor-manual/chapter05/fixbug.xml	2005-05-09 19:31:58 UTC (rev 5277)
@@ -8,7 +8,9 @@
   <title>Mark a bug fixed</title>
   <?dbhtml filename="fixbug.html"?>
 
-  <para>Bug fixed, changes commited to Subversion, now mark the bug fixed.</para>
+  <para>Once you have fixed a bug and have committed the relevant changes into
+        the Subversion repository, you need to mark the bug fixed in Bugzilla.
+  </para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem><para>Go to the bug you fixed and is assigned to you.</para>




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