r5316 - in trunk/BOOK: . chapter01 prologue

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Thu May 12 13:39:01 PDT 2005


Author: matthew
Date: 2005-05-12 14:39:00 -0600 (Thu, 12 May 2005)
New Revision: 5316

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general.ent
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml
Log:
Minor wording improvements

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-12 20:14:44 UTC (rev 5315)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-12 20:39:00 UTC (rev 5316)
@@ -84,6 +84,9 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>May 12th, 2005 [matt]: Minor wording improvements (thanks to
+Peter Ennis)</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>April 27th, 2005 [archaic]: Added a patch to fix 2 glibc
 testsuite failures when the running kernel is 2.6.11.x.</para></listitem>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2005-05-12 20:14:44 UTC (rev 5315)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent	2005-05-12 20:39:00 UTC (rev 5316)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "SVN-20050428">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "April 28, 2005">
+<!ENTITY version "SVN-20050512">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "May 12, 2005">
 <!ENTITY milestone "6.2">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml	2005-05-12 20:14:44 UTC (rev 5315)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml	2005-05-12 20:39:00 UTC (rev 5316)
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@
 
 <para>Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact
 Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
-forced to install several programs which are probably never used.
+forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
 These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
 not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller compared to most existing setups.  Does
+which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations.  Does
 this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
 creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a
 system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml	2005-05-12 20:14:44 UTC (rev 5315)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml	2005-05-12 20:39:00 UTC (rev 5316)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 <quote>generic</quote> Unix software distributions under Linux.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>The Linux Users' Guide
-<ulink url="http://espc22.murdoch.edu.au/~stewart/guide/guide.html"/></para>
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxhq.com/guides/LUG/guide.html"/></para>
 
 <para>This guide covers the usage of assorted Linux software.</para></listitem>
 




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