r5400 - in branches/6.1/BOOK: . chapter01 prologue

manuel at linuxfromscratch.org manuel at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon May 23 12:19:15 PDT 2005


Author: manuel
Date: 2005-05-23 13:19:14 -0600 (Mon, 23 May 2005)
New Revision: 5400

Modified:
   branches/6.1/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   branches/6.1/BOOK/general.ent
   branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml
   branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml
Log:
Merged r4316 from trunk: Minor wording improvements.

Modified: branches/6.1/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.1/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-23 19:13:06 UTC (rev 5399)
+++ branches/6.1/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2005-05-23 19:19:14 UTC (rev 5400)
@@ -84,6 +84,9 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 </listitem>
 
+<listitem><para>May 23nd, 2005 [manuel]: Minor wording improvements (thanks to
+Peter Ennis)</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para>May 22nd, 2005 [matt]: Updated to Linux-2.6.11.10.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>May 15th, 2005 [matt]: Added gzip security patch.</para></listitem>

Modified: branches/6.1/BOOK/general.ent
===================================================================
--- branches/6.1/BOOK/general.ent	2005-05-23 19:13:06 UTC (rev 5399)
+++ branches/6.1/BOOK/general.ent	2005-05-23 19:19:14 UTC (rev 5400)
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
-<!ENTITY version "TESTING-20050522">
-<!ENTITY releasedate "May 22, 2005">
+<!ENTITY version "TESTING-20050523">
+<!ENTITY releasedate "May 23, 2005">
 <!ENTITY milestone "6.1">
 
 <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/">

Modified: branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml	2005-05-23 19:13:06 UTC (rev 5399)
+++ branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/audience.xml	2005-05-23 19:19:14 UTC (rev 5400)
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@
 
 <para>Another benefit of LFS is the ability to create a very compact
 Linux system. When installing a regular distribution, one is often
-forced to install several programs which are probably never used.
+forced to include several programs which are probably never used.
 These programs waste precious disk space, or worse, CPU cycles. It is
 not difficult to build an LFS system of less than 100 megabytes (MB),
-which is substantially smaller compared to most existing setups.  Does
+which is substantially smaller when compared to the majority of existing installations.  Does
 this still sound like a lot of space? A few of us have been working on
 creating a very small embedded LFS system. We successfully built a
 system that was specialized to run the Apache web server with

Modified: branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml	2005-05-23 19:13:06 UTC (rev 5399)
+++ branches/6.1/BOOK/prologue/prerequisites.xml	2005-05-23 19:19:14 UTC (rev 5400)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 <quote>generic</quote> Unix software distributions under Linux.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para remap="verbatim">The Linux Users' Guide
-<ulink url="http://espc22.murdoch.edu.au/~stewart/guide/guide.html"/></para>
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxhq.com/guides/LUG/guide.html"/></para>
 
 <para>This guide covers the usage of assorted Linux software.</para></listitem>
 




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