r7585 - trunk/BOOK/prologue

jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org jhuntwork at linuxfromscratch.org
Wed May 3 14:10:45 PDT 2006


Author: jhuntwork
Date: 2006-05-03 15:10:44 -0600 (Wed, 03 May 2006)
New Revision: 7585

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml
Log:
Slight re-wording on hostreqs page and typo fix.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml	2006-05-03 19:43:38 UTC (rev 7584)
+++ trunk/BOOK/prologue/hostreqs.xml	2006-05-03 21:10:44 UTC (rev 7585)
@@ -110,13 +110,12 @@
 
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>To see all the appropriate versions, copy the following script
-  to your system and run it.</para>
+  <para>To see whether your host system has all the appropriate versions, run the following:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>cat > version-check.sh << "EOF"
 <literal>#!/bin/bash
 
-# Simple script to list version numbers of critical developmet tools
+# Simple script to list version numbers of critical development tools
 
 bash --version | head -n1 | cut -d" " -f2-4
 echo -n "Binutils: "; ld --version | head -n1 | cut -d" " -f3-4




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