r7595 - trunk/BOOK/chapter01

matthew at linuxfromscratch.org matthew at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon May 8 13:40:06 PDT 2006


Author: matthew
Date: 2006-05-08 14:40:05 -0600 (Mon, 08 May 2006)
New Revision: 7595

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/askforhelp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
Log:
Fix a couple of typos in Chapter 1

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/askforhelp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/askforhelp.xml	2006-05-08 20:08:04 UTC (rev 7594)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/askforhelp.xml	2006-05-08 20:40:05 UTC (rev 7595)
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
   <para>We also have a wonderful LFS community that is willing to offer
   assistance through the mailing lists and IRC (see the <xref
   linkend="ch-intro-resources"/> section of this book). However,
-  we get several support questions everyday and many of them can be easily
+  we get several support questions every day and many of them can be easily
   answered by going to the FAQ and by searching the mailing lists first.
-  So for us to offer the best assistance possible, you need to do some
+  So, for us to offer the best assistance possible, you need to do some
   research on your own first. That allows us to focus on the more unusual
   support needs. If your searches do not produce a solution, please include
   all relevant information (mentioned below) in your request for help.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2006-05-08 20:08:04 UTC (rev 7594)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/changelog.xml	2006-05-08 20:40:05 UTC (rev 7595)
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>[manuel] - Fixed command to change $LFS/tools
-          ownewrship. Resolves ticket #1780.</para>
+          ownership. Resolves ticket #1780.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -170,7 +170,8 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>[manuel] - Added commands to determine the version of the
           required packages installed on the host. Thanks to Bruce Dubbs
-          for the commands list and Randy McMurchy for review the wording.</para>
+          for the commands list and Randy McMurchy for reviewing the
+          wording.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[manuel] - Alphabetized patches list. Thanks to Justin
@@ -337,11 +338,11 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>[archaic] - Moved the chowning of /tools to the end of chapter 5
           and rewrote note about backing up or re-using /tools. Moved the
-          mounting of kernel filesystems before pkgmgt page and rewrote the page
-          to mount --bind /dev and mount all other kernel filesystems while
-          outside chroot. Rewrote note about re-entering chroot and remounting
-          kernel filesystems. Removed /dev from the list of dirs created in
-          chroot and added it before chroot.</para>
+          mounting of kernel filesystems before the package management page and
+          rewrote the page to mount --bind /dev and mount all other kernel
+          filesystems while outside chroot. Rewrote note about re-entering
+          chroot and remounting kernel filesystems. Removed /dev from the list
+          of dirs created in chroot and added it before chroot.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -643,7 +644,7 @@
           bootscript to work with this version of udev.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matthew] - Remove the hotplug package and related bootscript
+          <para>[matthew] - Remove the hotplug package and related bootscript.
           Udev will now handle device creation and module loading.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
@@ -1035,15 +1036,6 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>November 24, 2005</para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: LFS-6.1.1-pre2 release.</para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
       <para>November 23, 2005</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
@@ -1064,15 +1056,6 @@
     </listitem>
 
     <listitem>
-      <para>November 17, 2005</para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: LFS-6.1.1-pre1 release.</para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
       <para>November 16, 2005</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
@@ -1290,7 +1273,7 @@
           (fixes bug 1639).</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Add a cdrom group as required by the Udev rules
+          <para>[matt]: Add a cdrom group as required by the Udev rules.
           file</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -1444,13 +1427,13 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>[matt]: Add patch to stop <command>cfdisk</command> segfaulting
           when invoked on devices with partitions that don't contain an ext2,
-          ext3, xfs or jfs filesystem (see bug 1604)</para>
+          ext3, xfs or jfs filesystem (see bug 1604).</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to libtool-1.5.20</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to libtool-1.5.20.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to findutils-4.2.25</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to findutils-4.2.25.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -1513,10 +1496,10 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[matt]: Install Udev's documentation relating to configuring
-          rules (fixes bug 1622)</para>
+          rules (fixes bug 1622).</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to Man-1.6a</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to Man-1.6a.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -1525,7 +1508,7 @@
       <para>August 20th, 2005</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Stop moving some of coreutils binaries to /bin as
+          <para>[matt]: Stop moving some of coreutils' binaries to /bin as
           they aren't required to be there (fixes bug 1620).</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -1535,13 +1518,13 @@
       <para>August 19th, 2005</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to Udev-068</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to Udev-068.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to IANA-etc-2.00</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to IANA-etc-2.00.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to file-4.15</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Upgrade to file-4.15.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -1579,7 +1562,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>[matt]: Alter the GCC -fomit-frame-pointer sed to protect
-          from multiple invocations (Greg Schafer)</para>
+          from multiple invocations (Greg Schafer).</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -1635,7 +1618,7 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[matt]: Fix incorrect version number for expect's installed
-          library (Bug 1608)</para>
+          library (Bug 1608).</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -1690,17 +1673,17 @@
       <para>July 28th, 2005</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patch for kbd</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patch for kbd.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patch for inetutils</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patch for inetutils.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[matt]: Remove the note regarding a known test failure in GRUB.
-          The test no longer fails under GCC-4</para>
+          The test no longer fails under GCC-4.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patch to chapter06 tar</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patch to chapter06 tar.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </listitem>
@@ -1763,7 +1746,7 @@
       <para>July 21st, 2005</para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patches to chapter06 glibc</para>
+          <para>[matt]: Add GCC-4 related patches to chapter06 glibc.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>[matt]: Unset the GCC_INCLUDEDIR variable once it's no longer

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml	2006-05-08 20:08:04 UTC (rev 7594)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter01/how.xml	2006-05-08 20:40:05 UTC (rev 7595)
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
   them on the new file system. <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/>
   discusses the setup for an appropriate working environment. Please read
   <xref linkend="chapter-final-preps"/> carefully as it explains several
-  important issues the developer should be aware of before beginning to
+  important issues the reader should be aware of before beginning to
   work through <xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> and beyond.</para>
 
   <para><xref linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> explains the




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