r7596 - trunk/BOOK/chapter02

ken at linuxfromscratch.org ken at linuxfromscratch.org
Mon May 8 14:55:43 PDT 2006


Author: ken
Date: 2006-05-08 15:55:43 -0600 (Mon, 08 May 2006)
New Revision: 7596

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
Log:
Minor rewording, also removes unnecessary visible whitespace.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml	2006-05-08 20:40:05 UTC (rev 7595)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml	2006-05-08 21:55:43 UTC (rev 7596)
@@ -14,10 +14,11 @@
   The most widely-used system in the Linux world is the second extended file
   system (<systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>), but with newer
   high-capacity hard disks, journaling file systems are becoming increasingly
-  popular. The third extended filesystem (<systemitem class="filesystem">ext3
-  </systemitem>) is a widely-used development of <systemitem class="filesystem">
-  ext2</systemitem> which adds a journal and is compatible with the E2fsprogs
-  utilities. We will create an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
+  popular. The third extended filesystem (<systemitem
+  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>) is a widely used enhancement to
+  <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>, which adds journalling
+  capabilities and is compatible with the E2fsprogs utilities.
+  We will create an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
   file system. Build instructions for other file systems can be found at
   <ulink url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/filesystems.html"/>.</para>
 




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