r8173 - trunk/BOOK/chapter02

ken at linuxfromscratch.org ken at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Jun 24 05:44:55 PDT 2007


Author: ken
Date: 2007-06-24 06:44:55 -0600 (Sun, 24 Jun 2007)
New Revision: 8173

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
Log:
Rewording so that a colon can be comfortably added to lead in to a command, to help people using screen readers.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml	2007-06-24 12:36:12 UTC (rev 8172)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
@@ -62,10 +62,10 @@
 rm -rfv e2fsprogs-&e2fsprogs-version;</userinput></screen>
   </note>
 
-  <para>If a <systemitem class="filesystem">swap</systemitem> partition was
-  created, it will need to be initialized for use by issuing the command below.
-  If you are using an existing <systemitem class="filesystem">swap</systemitem>
-  partition, there is no need to format it.</para>
+  <para>If you are using an existing <systemitem class="filesystem">swap
+  </systemitem> partition, there is no need to format it. If a new
+  <systemitem class="filesystem"> swap</systemitem> partition was created,
+  it will need to be initialized with this command:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>mkswap /dev/<replaceable><yyy></replaceable></userinput></screen>
 




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