r8174 - in trunk/BOOK: chapter05 chapter06 chapter07

ken at linuxfromscratch.org ken at linuxfromscratch.org
Sun Jun 24 06:03:35 PDT 2007


Author: ken
Date: 2007-06-24 07:03:35 -0600 (Sun, 24 Jun 2007)
New Revision: 8174

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/expect.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/bison.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/createfiles.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gzip.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/patch.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/readjusting.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
   trunk/BOOK/chapter07/console.xml
Log:
Add missing colons wherever we expect the builder to key in the userinput.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/adjusting.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
   to be renamed so that it can be properly found and used. First, backup the
   original linker, then replace it with the adjusted linker. We'll also
   create a link to its counterpart in <filename class="directory">
-  /tools/$(gcc -dumpmachine)/bin</filename></para>
+  /tools/$(gcc -dumpmachine)/bin</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mv -v /tools/bin/{ld,ld-old}
 mv -v /tools/$(gcc -dumpmachine)/bin/{ld,ld-old}
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
   <para>For the sake of accuracy, it is recommended to use a copy-and-paste
   method when issuing the following command. Be sure to visually inspect the
   specs file and verify that all occurrences of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>
-  have been replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+  have been replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>:</para>
 
   <important>
     <para>If working on a platform where the name of the dynamic linker is

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/expect.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/expect.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/expect.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     <para>Next, force Expect's configure script to use <filename>/bin/stty</filename>
     instead of a <filename>/usr/local/bin/stty</filename> it may find on the host system.
     This will ensure that our testsuite tools remain sane for the final builds of our
-    toolchain.</para>
+    toolchain:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp configure{,.bak}
 sed 's:/usr/local/bin:/bin:' configure.bak > configure</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass1.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@
     used to keep programs generic and therefore usable on all kinds of UNIX
     systems where the GNU C compiler is not always installed. Running
     <command>cc</command> leaves the system administrator free to decide
-    which C compiler to install.</para>
+    which C compiler to install:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>ln -vs gcc /tools/bin/cc</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter05/gcc-pass2.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
     built GCC with the <option>-fomit-frame-pointer</option> compiler flag.
     Non-bootstrap builds omit this flag by default, so apply the following
     <command>sed</command> to use it in order to ensure consistent compiler
-    builds.</para>
+    builds:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cp -v gcc/Makefile.in{,.tmp} &&
 sed 's/^XCFLAGS =$/& -fomit-frame-pointer/' gcc/Makefile.in.tmp \

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/bison.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/bison.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/bison.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     <para>The configure system causes bison to be built without support for
     internationalization of error messages if a <command>bison</command>
     program is not already in $PATH.  The following addition will correct
-    this.</para>
+    this:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo '#define YYENABLE_NLS 1' >> config.h</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/createfiles.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/createfiles.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/createfiles.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
   <para>Some programs use hard-wired paths to programs which do not exist yet. In
   order to satisfy these programs, create a number of symbolic links which will be
   replaced by real files throughout the course of this chapter after the software
-  has been installed.</para>
+  has been installed:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>ln -sv /tools/bin/{bash,cat,grep,pwd,stty} /bin
 ln -sv /tools/bin/perl /usr/bin
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
   linkend="chapter-temporary-tools"/> and the
   <filename>/etc/passwd</filename> and <filename>/etc/group</filename>
   files have been created, user name and group name resolution will now
-  work.</para>
+  work:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>exec /tools/bin/bash --login +h</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     built GCC with the <option>-fomit-frame-pointer</option> compiler flag.
     Non-bootstrap builds omit this flag by default, so apply the following
     <command>sed</command> to use it in order to ensure consistent compiler
-    builds.</para>
+    builds:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's/^XCFLAGS =$/& -fomit-frame-pointer/' gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
     compile time whether mktemp is present, and hardcodes the result in a test.
     This will cause the script to fall back to using less random names for
     temporary files.  We will be installing mktemp later, so the following sed
-    will simulate its presence.</para>
+    will simulate its presence:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's/@have_mktemp_command@/yes/' gcc/gccbug.in</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gzip.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gzip.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gzip.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Move some programs that do not need to be on the root filesystem.</para>
+    <para>Move some programs that do not need to be on the root filesystem:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mv -v /bin/{gzexe,uncompress,zcmp,zdiff,zegrep} /usr/bin
 mv -v /bin/{zfgrep,zforce,zgrep,zless,zmore,znew} /usr/bin</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
     encoding when it displays them, so that they will display in both UTF-8
     and traditional locales.  Because this script is intended for limited use
     during the system build, for public data, we will not bother with error
-    checking, nor use a non-predictable temporary file name.</para>
+    checking, nor use a non-predictable temporary file name:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cat >> convert-mans << "EOF"
 <literal>#!/bin/sh -e

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/patch.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/patch.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/patch.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of Patch</title>
 
-    <para>Prepare Patch for compilation.</para>
+    <para>Prepare Patch for compilation:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/perl.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 
     <para>First create a basic <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file which will be
     referenced in one of Perl's configuration files as well as being used used by
-    the testsuite if you run that.</para>
+    the testsuite if you run that:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>echo "127.0.0.1 localhost $(hostname)" > /etc/hosts</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/readjusting.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/readjusting.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/readjusting.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   <para>First, backup the <filename class="directory">/tools</filename> linker,
   and replace it with the adjusted linker we made in chapter 5. We'll also create
   a link to its counterpart in <filename class="directory">/tools/$(gcc
-  -dumpmachine)/bin</filename>.</para>
+  -dumpmachine)/bin</filename>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>mv -v /tools/bin/{ld,ld-old}
 mv -v /tools/$(gcc -dumpmachine)/bin/{ld,ld-old}
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
   <para>Next, amend the GCC specs file so that it points to the new
   dynamic linker, and so that GCC knows where to find the correct headers
   and Glibc start files. A <command>sed</command> command accomplishes
-  this.</para>
+  this:</para>
 
   <important>
     <para>If working on a platform where the name of the dynamic linker is

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/shadow.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
 
     <para>Shadow supplies other manual pages in a UTF-8 encoding.  Man-DB
     can display these in the recommended encodings by using the
-    <command>convert-mans</command> script which we installed.</para>
+    <command>convert-mans</command> script which we installed:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>for i in de es fi fr id it pt_BR; do
     convert-mans UTF-8 ISO-8859-1 man/${i}/*.?
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
     passwords longer than 8 characters. It is also necessary to change the
     obsolete <filename class="directory">/var/spool/mail</filename> location
     for user mailboxes that Shadow uses by default to the <filename
-    class="directory">/var/mail</filename> location used currently.</para>
+    class="directory">/var/mail</filename> location used currently:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i -e 's@#MD5_CRYPT_ENAB.no at MD5_CRYPT_ENAB yes@' \
     -e 's@/var/spool/mail@/var/mail@' etc/login.defs</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/console.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/console.xml	2007-06-24 12:44:55 UTC (rev 8173)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/console.xml	2007-06-24 13:03:35 UTC (rev 8174)
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
       a framebuffer is used. If one wants to have bright colors without
       framebuffer and can live without characters not belonging to his language,
       it is still possible to use a language-specific 256-glyph font, as
-      illustrated below.</para>
+      illustrated below:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>cat > /etc/sysconfig/console << "EOF"
 <literal># Begin /etc/sysconfig/console




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