r9574 - in trunk/BOOK: . bootscripts bootscripts/lfs/init.d bootscripts/lfs/sysconfig/network-devices bootscripts/lfs/sysconfig/network-devices/services chapter01 chapter06 chapter07 prologue

Jean-Philippe MENGUAL jmengual at linuxfromscratch.org
Tue Aug 2 00:21:34 PDT 2011


Hi,

As usual, I report some typos I saw, among these I think the 1st is the
most important for the understanding.

Le lundi 01 août 2011 à 20:15 -0600, bdubbs at linuxfromscratch.org a
écrit :
> Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/bootscripts.xml	2011-07-17 19:17:28 UTC (rev 9573)
> +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/bootscripts.xml	2011-08-02 02:15:42 UTC (rev 9574)
> 
> @@ -325,7 +324,7 @@
>          <term><command>udev_retry</command></term>
>          <listitem>
>            <para>Retries failed udev uevents, and copies generated rules
> -          files from <filename class="directory">/dev/.udev</filename> to
> +          files from to
>            <filename class="directory">/etc/udev/rules.d</filename> if required</para>
>            <indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-retry-bootscripts">
>              <primary sortas="d-udev-retry">udev_retry</primary>
> +
>  </sect1>
> 
> Modified: trunk/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml	2011-07-17 19:17:28 UTC (rev 9573)
> +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/network.xml	2011-08-02 02:15:42 UTC (rev 9574)
> @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
>  <sect1 id="ch-scripts-network">
> -    <quote>xyz</quote> is a network interface name. Inside this directory
> -    would be files defining the attributes to this interface, such as its IP
> -    address(es), subnet masks, and so forth.</para>
> +    depends on the files in <filename
> +    class="directory">/etc/sysconfig/</filename>.  This directory should
> +    contain a file for each interface to be configured, such as
> +    <filename>ifconfig.xyz</filename>, where <quote>xyz</quote> is is

Remove one "is".

> +++ trunk/BOOK/chapter07/usage.xml	2011-08-02 02:15:42 UTC (rev 9574)
> @@ -37,7 +37,80 @@
>  5: same as 4, it is usually used for GUI login (like X's <command>xdm</command> or KDE's <command>kdm</command>)
>  6: reboot the computer</literallayout>
>  
> -  <para>The command used to change run-levels is <command>init
> +  <sect2 id="conf-sysvinit" role="configuration">
> +  <title>Configuring Sysvinit</title>
> +
> +  <indexterm zone="conf-sysvinit">
> +    <primary sortas="a-Sysvinit">Sysvinit</primary>
> +    <secondary>configuring</secondary>
> +  <para>As a convenience, the <command>rc</command> script reads a library of
> +  functions in <filename class="directory">/lib/boot/functions</filename>.
> +  This library also reads an optional configuration file,
> +  <filename>/etc/sysconfig/init_params</filename>.  Any of the system
> +  configuration file parameters described in subsequent sections can be
> +  alternatively placed in this file allowing consolidation of all system
> +  parameters in thsi one file.</para>

This
> 
> Regards,
> 
-  
       Jean-Philippe MENGUAL
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